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23.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- The Last Organ Grinder -
 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

2st place in the contest

The young mother died, before she could hold her newborn child Paternity was unknown the secret his mother had never shared The boy was cradled in the arms of his grandmother they were aged poor people in the countryside a few chickens and four cows in the barn were all they had no prosperity gossiping at the child's birth - bite thy sinful tongue Characterized by tight finances and little food The grandfather found hope in the hopeless The economy needed a boost In the wood shed he found the antique organ grinder Polished it shiny and gave it fresh colors Life was not meant to be lived in wealth the organ pipes were still breathing … gave hope for a simpler everyday life Every afternoon he took it on his back and went his way with heavy steps it was jingling coin that drew him ... a shame to live on alms daily health and toil the poor man's pride and honour - hope in his tired eyes

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Date: 11/23/2023 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful/creative write/picture. Hugs... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
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Date: 11/22/2023 11:42:00 AM
Your narrative is great story telling and an honest reflection on organ grinders.. great imagination.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/30/2023 1:12:00 AM
This made me happy just seeing the image at the top. :-) A beautiful Narrative poem, my friend. A hard life but a good life. I could feel the character of this fine old fellow. Good luck in the contest. Bill
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:04:00 AM
This is beautiful dear Anne-Lise. Told in your unmistakable style, you bring the characters to life. Now where are you, you haven't written a poem for days?
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Date: 10/28/2023 3:37:00 AM
Hi there, This poem paints such great visuals. Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:00:00 PM
very touching poem, gracious melody of art, love music , everywhere and now, thanks poet
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:10:00 PM
I like the inclusion of haiku. It adds to the quirky feel of this piece.
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Date: 10/24/2023 9:26:00 AM
Very creative and original. A wonderful poem and a great solution with the organ grinder. Loved this poem by Anne Lise. Blessings.
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Date: 10/24/2023 8:19:00 AM
Enjoyed this write very much, Anne-Lise! …the organ pipes were still breathing…a shame to live on alms…his ingenuity might bring a bit of life back to the streets and to his pockets.
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Date: 10/24/2023 7:49:00 AM
Wow what an excellent creative take on this prompt! Ah i need to get started to write for this too. Yours is so good! Its like you can do any prompt and still sound so imaginative! With such poignant and thoughtful lines! The last paragraph made me feel so much sigh!but I love so many lines in this touching narrative! So descriptive and moving! Pleasure reading this! Goodluck for the contest; i bet silent one will love this. Felt this. Fave for me
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Date: 10/23/2023 8:42:00 PM
Anne-Lise you have woven a lovely, sad story with a beautifully descriptive setting.
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:41:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, James ... a simple life in poverty ... but rich in heart :) - hugs
Date: 10/23/2023 5:29:00 PM
A beautiful story you crafted. I could only come up with a limerick!
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:38:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs
Date: 10/23/2023 4:00:00 PM
an exquisitely created poem. You captured the feeling of poverty and contrasted it with the grandfather's hope and in his doing what he needed to do. He had pride as well. Your words and images evoked empathy in me. A delightful read...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:37:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment... they lived poor... but their hearts were rich, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 10/23/2023 3:35:00 PM
This powerful poem is about doing what needs to be done in extreme circumstances, driven by the power of love...good luck dear poet
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2023 1:35:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Frederic ... everything to survive with love :) - hugs
Date: 10/23/2023 12:26:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Your words have been expertly woven together, capturing the essence of the profound emotional state of a newborn without care. Your writing evokes sympathy, as a calm heart remains unshaken in the midst of the world's chaos and turmoil. Your piece's elegant composition truly demonstrates your talent.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2023 1:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment ... always uplifting words from you, Las :) - hugs
Date: 10/23/2023 7:52:00 AM
Exceptional. love it. God bless you with a win, sweet lady. love, Gina
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:32:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment ... appreciate your words, Gina :) - hugs

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