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To turn your mind and thoughts back in time Much has crumbled and something will stand forever Cobweb, dust, rust and blood Visible signs of the apostle's deeds Countless miles Remembering the man left behind in a cycle - in the backyard of death This stirs my curiosity - the identity of the dead is unknown Thoughts act like an echo Because is so deliberately naive - to believe things were better before A story is lived forwards and interpreted backwards Blur of old memories even in possession of a sharpened glance The sound of church bells ... far away The door is sealed 19/09/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Any poem you want to write exactly 100 words Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger 1st place in the contest

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Date: 10/19/2019 1:16:00 PM
"The door is sealed" Nice way to end...An interesting perspective...we are in constant movement like the planets... what was was...Congratulations Anne-Lise
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Date: 10/19/2019 1:18:00 PM
- Many thanks Arturo, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2019 4:32:00 PM
Anne-Lise congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Date: 9/27/2019 1:57:00 AM
- Many thanks D.H., for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2019 12:47:00 PM
Anne-Lise always love your writes!;) congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 9/26/2019 2:18:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2019 11:37:00 AM
Very deep and descriptive thoughts. There were so many creative ways to express 100 words. Congratulations
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:49:00 AM
- Many thanks Janis, for friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2019 7:38:00 AM
Very thought provoking indeed. I'm glad you were a winner. Bless you
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:49:00 AM
- Regina, many thanks for friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2019 7:31:00 AM
This left me in deep thought, Anne-Lise, beautifully expressed. Congrats on your top win. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2019 8:14:00 PM
I am in awe of this potent, profound and beautifully expressive poem, Anne-Lise. Every line lends a precious facet to the depth and artistry of this wondrous gem. A fav! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:47:00 AM
- Many thanks Susan, for your visit the fave and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/22/2019 12:46:00 PM
A wonderful expressive write my friend. love phyl
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Date: 9/22/2019 1:29:00 PM
- Phyllis, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/20/2019 10:58:00 AM
Such an intense powerful write my dear friend, your imagery is breathtaking as it speaks of both the living and the dead -time deteriorates anything in its path - an excellent write and a fav Anne-Lise, Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 9/21/2019 11:36:00 AM
- Many thanks for the fave and your lovely comment, my friend Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 7:32:00 PM
this is an excellent write my friend...layered in depths of life and death! well crafted...hugs:)
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 6:22:00 PM
Anne-Lise your poem is really beautiful and your image is amazing, I love both
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 6:18:00 PM
I agree with Heidi...(((Amazing)))...one of your best Anne-Lise...a fav...(((Super Hugs)))...ps~love the pic too...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for the fave and your lovely comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 4:29:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing!! Excellent :)
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 7:17:00 AM
A well crafted write Anne...hugs
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 7:01:00 AM
I read this poem as a metaphor on life..your photo speaks indeed to what time does to things and people.. I found your write deep, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 6:27:00 AM
A very nice graphic poem.The picture makes the poem more beautifu.
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Akham :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 6:13:00 AM
A picture that certainly inspired you to write a deep poem anne-lise I love the way the poem built...makes me want to discover more:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/19/2019 6:11:00 AM
How often do we see old relics' and wonder what stories lay buried, you're right Anne it does stir our curiosity. Tom. PS. Greetings from Turkey.
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Date: 9/20/2019 3:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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