- Sweet Dance -

Dance with me
                                I have borrowed mum`s summer hat
                            Dressed up with lipstick and pearl necklace
                    The good smell....do not say it but it`s mum`s perfume
                          The high heel red shoes are mum`s and they fits
                         me almost I`m nearly four years old and a big girl
                                   I have dressed up so nice just for you
                         Dance with me dad, I`m your little princess tonight













27.03.2012
A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 9/9/2012 3:05:00 AM
This is a really sweet and adorable poem Anne. Loved reading it! It made me feel good. Very well written! :)
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Date: 9/9/2012 3:10:00 AM
Abhinav, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/14/2012 1:28:00 PM
Awwe this is adorable (: I do remember dressing up and dancing with my Daddy. And now my Niece (geeze time flys) is going to be two, and loves to dress up in "Aunt Yaya" and mommys clothing and dances. This is a poem to cherish, along with the memories (:
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2012 1:33:00 PM
So sweet - glad you like it Jay. - Have fun with your niece....and dance with her. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2012 1:28:00 PM
Ps, thank you for your comments, and for sharing your poetry with me (:
Date: 8/9/2012 6:23:00 AM
as usual late! but enjoyed this wonderful poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/9/2012 6:31:00 AM
Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/4/2012 6:03:00 AM
simple and nice .thank you for sharing .jk
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:35:00 AM
jk. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/31/2012 3:39:00 AM
What a sweet poem. We all did this sort of thing didn't we, when we were children. I loved dancing shows because it was a time to dress up and to wear make-up. I never wanted to take it off before my return home on the bus, ha ha.
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Date: 5/31/2012 3:41:00 AM
Josie, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/28/2012 8:18:00 AM
aaaw adorable i enjoyed this short sweet poem xD
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Date: 5/28/2012 9:19:00 AM
Maria, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/24/2012 6:26:00 PM
I love this poem adorable I can almost picture the little girl
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Date: 5/25/2012 2:19:00 PM
Carmen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/11/2012 10:05:00 AM
nice
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Date: 5/11/2012 10:50:00 AM
Keith, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/8/2012 7:03:00 PM
Such an adorable poem of one little girl who loves to dress up and be special in her daddy's eyes! Nicely done, Anne Lise!
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:22:00 AM
Carrie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/8/2012 7:54:00 AM
ahhh you brought a tear of rememberance to my eye. They used to love to dance with dad. I miss it so much
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Date: 5/8/2012 10:26:00 AM
Wooow.. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/22/2012 4:37:00 PM
The precious childhood, That's a lovely story poem.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 4/23/2012 12:07:00 AM
Erich, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/16/2012 3:30:00 PM
We are 1% perception and 99 % memories, for we can sense but a tiny fragment of our world and yet remember everything. Not so sweet poet, she senses all her memories, and then feel where she should sense - the everlasting bonds that childhood makes. Thanks for your persistent kindness and inspirration - your soul is beautiful too. One love
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:45:00 PM
David, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 4/13/2012 9:05:00 AM
Wonderful expression of sweet memory of childhood and love to Dad. Well done my sweet friend, loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:35:00 AM
bl, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/12/2012 12:11:00 PM
I think anyone can relate to this sweet wrtie.
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Date: 4/12/2012 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Charles for reading and comments my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 4/10/2012 2:32:00 PM
Sweet! MatthewAnish
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Date: 4/10/2012 2:35:00 PM
Matthew, thank you for visit and comments on my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/6/2012 11:16:00 AM
Who better for a little girl to dance with than her Dad. Such a sweet verse!
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:51:00 PM
Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/5/2012 1:33:00 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise, for your kind comment re my poem. Sweet poem. Hope you have an awesome Easter. God bless & love, Maureen
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:50:00 PM
Maureen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 4/4/2012 8:03:00 AM
love love lovely sweet poem-Charma
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:49:00 PM
Charma, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/3/2012 10:59:00 AM
A perfect poem! So very cute and realistic!
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:49:00 PM
Carol, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/31/2012 10:35:00 AM
Anne Lise, Oh to be a little girl. Such fun. love, Kathy
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:47:00 PM
Kathryn thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/30/2012 4:22:00 PM
Received your soup mail from your secretary...you are so lucky to have one of those...(jealous)...ha ha. Hope the next several days are relaxing and full of rediscovery!...Thinkin' of ya! This poem is so darn cutesy! (love the new avatar).
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Gwen for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/30/2012 9:43:00 AM
A very sweet poem, Anne-Lise.. Beautiful story in short :)
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Date: 3/30/2012 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Dinda for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/30/2012 12:01:00 AM
Reminiscent of that little girl inside me Anne-lise! Thanks for this cute poem. I did smile as I read it along. Thanks for dropping by my work. I have not been writing lately, but I will pretty soon. Dalila
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Date: 3/30/2012 1:27:00 AM
Dalila, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/29/2012 2:41:00 PM
Wonderful. I love children's poetry - have written a lot of it myself. Love, daver
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Date: 3/29/2012 3:06:00 PM
Daver, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/29/2012 2:16:00 PM
Oh Anne Lise, this is so beautiful! It took me back to when my Dad and I would dance. I would stand on his shoes........Tears....I love love love this. I can still see those burgandy wing tips! Well done hon, Love, Shar
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Date: 3/29/2012 3:06:00 PM
Sharon, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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