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- Swans Or Snowflakes -

Soft and sensitive they fall Is it beautiful white swans with fluffy white feathers light Tickles on the nose A moment poignant and beautiful that it is impossible to remain unmoved The whole sky full Millions of snowflakes they fall softly no sound Silence ... hold your breath They melt in my hands So similar, but so different It falls millions of snowflakes and the earth is colored white 05.12.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Subhashish Dasgupta

Date: 1/10/2015 9:13:00 AM

elegant poem.....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2015 11:57:00 AM

- Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - // Anne-Lise :)

Lesley Micuda

Date: 12/31/2014 11:17:00 AM

both are such wonders of heaven, aren't they?! delicate and elegant and the purest of white! Lovely poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 5:28:00 AM

- Yes, they are Lesley :) - Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter

Date: 12/29/2014 3:46:00 PM

Awesome imagery. I feel I'm personally experiencing it. Beautiful composition, Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/30/2014 3:03:00 AM

- Paul, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/22/2014 3:02:00 PM

Nice winter poem! I celebrate Chanukah. Are there some Jewish people in Norway? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2014 3:42:00 PM

- Yes, many Jewish in Norway, Matthew - Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason

Date: 12/16/2014 7:58:00 AM

wonderful poem anne lise, really enjoyed this one this morning. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2014 8:14:00 AM

- Ralph, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/13/2014 4:44:00 PM

I can just see and feel the snowflakes. There is something so magical about standing outside in the falling snow.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/14/2014 4:18:00 AM

- Yes, it is - Dear Brenda, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/13/2014 12:21:00 PM

Both have their beauty. Snow has been melting here this week and above freezing so has been wonderful to be outside. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/13/2014 1:39:00 PM

- No snow here yet ...... rain, rain and rain - Dear Phyllis, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/12/2014 6:49:00 AM

You make this sound so enchanting, romantic, and unmissable. Enjoy the season.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2014 7:48:00 AM

- Scott, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/9/2014 9:41:00 AM

A gentle and inspiring poem my friend! A pleasure to read and see such images come forth . Super 7 on this one and I agree, snowflakes and white swans are beautiful...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2014 11:15:00 AM

- Robert, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/9/2014 7:14:00 AM

snowflakes are metaphor for swan. real good. "millions of snowflakes" I feel their warmth...love to your cuteself the baby Anne-Lise. Hugs! ...rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2014 7:37:00 AM

- Rajat, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/8/2014 11:46:00 PM

beautiful Anne Lise.. ! :) love the calm yet so delicately painted portrait from your words.. :)! xoxo.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2014 3:16:00 AM

- Olive, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/8/2014 1:17:00 PM

more happy snowflakes this sunday, anne.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2014 1:58:00 PM

- Huggs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/8/2014 12:47:00 PM

Exhilarating picture of purity! Wonderfully done, dear Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2014 1:57:00 PM

- Demetrios, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/8/2014 8:07:00 AM

You had me right from the title, beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2014 11:19:00 AM

- Richard, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/8/2014 5:36:00 AM

I too love snowfalls. An amazing write on one of my favorite loves. Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2014 6:18:00 AM

- I'm glad you enjoy my poem Maurice, thank you for comments and visit - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sibusiso Lubimbi

Date: 12/8/2014 1:17:00 AM

i felt every detail of your poem, saw each description in my mind. I am out of words i wish i could write poems half as good as this.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2014 3:08:00 AM

- Sibusiso, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 12/7/2014 10:18:00 PM

Lovely and magical seasonal treat dear Anne Lise..just lovely...and who is the cutie in your avatar?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2014 3:07:00 AM

- The cute baby is just a picture I found on the net :)) - Thank you Donna for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/7/2014 12:59:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise, Dropping by here to read your latest very fine write my dear friend!!You've got the "magic touch" indeed with your words here and the imagery, and the cadence of your verses is enchanting!! A most beautiful and heartfelt write!! A "7" and a FAV from me!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2014 1:33:00 PM

- Thank you for beautiful comments, my dear friend Gary ..... "7" and not least a fav. - Always nice to read your commets - greatly appreciate your visit - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/7/2014 11:10:00 AM

Just exactlly the way it is Anne,what a good Expression! I love this,kudos for this great work...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2014 1:35:00 PM

- I'm glad you enjoy my poem Kayod5, thank you for comments and visit - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/7/2014 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for reminding me of my childhood with this enchanting write, Sunshine! It is magical...It really is! Love you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2014 10:47:00 AM

- Kind memories I hope, dear Eileen - Thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/7/2014 6:19:00 AM

Excellent. Very delightful writing. Always love your poems. Thanks for sharing

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2014 6:23:00 AM

- Ravi, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nathan D.

Date: 12/7/2014 12:24:00 AM

very lively write with great imagery and expression.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2014 4:57:00 AM

- Nathan, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/6/2014 11:54:00 AM

Excellent winter's picture adorned on the green pitch of the earth with pure white color. Loved always, my lovely lovely beautiful friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2014 12:03:00 PM

- Dear Bl, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/6/2014 7:20:00 AM

I feel like I have stepped into a winter wonderland; beauty, silence and snow.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2014 11:40:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey - We do not have snow yet ..... but, a lot of rain - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/6/2014 2:23:00 AM

Superb imagery so well woven Into tender words Anne Lise! Great work!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2014 4:05:00 AM

- Dr.Upma, thank you for comments and visits to my poem - Swans Or Snowflakes - oxox // Anne-Lise :)