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29.11.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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  Frozen window a blackboard to write on
  a motivational boost 

  Smelling romantic moonlight
  can be a two-part problem - or shared enjoyment

  Sliding down the hill in an open suitcase
  reindeer in fur coats - the merchant's profit

  The bathing season is already ended
  scientists cast doubt on the health effects of ice bathing

  The frozen untuned strings of the soul
  I'm considering buying a piano

  You don't need professional education
  look - the gooses track in the snow

  Wet lips, juicy tangerines
  garlic and ginger in a bread bag

  In the Advent calendar's windows
  soft velvet hearts and twin cherries

  Avoid this year's cold - recommend
  a splash of whiskey morning, noon and night

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/3/2024 5:19:00 AM

Anne-Lise, a lot of wise information and things to think about here. We can put it together in a lot of different ways, which does create fun for me. There are such a lot of contrasts. Smiles!

John Read

Date: 11/30/2024 8:35:00 AM

Hi Anne, I'm with Tom on that one, a whisky warms those cockles of the heart, as for the ice bathing that's definitely a no no. xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/30/2024 8:24:00 AM

I'll go along with the whiskey, nothing like a Tot to keep out the winter chill, might put some on my porridge lol. Hope your weekend is going well Anne-Lise. Tom