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27.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                  Consider a smarter analysis
                            - loveliness immortal with a squeeze

                                     If you have a short fuse
                                            - learn to lose

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Date: 10/12/2023 4:06:00 PM
Hi, Agree! People need to be gracious when losing. Not everyone can win all of the time. Being able to lose with dignity shows character. Love your message! - Gail
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Date: 10/2/2023 1:40:00 PM
Smiling the fuse needs a match to light striking but true you paint the fuse smiling
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Date: 10/1/2023 9:44:00 PM
Excellent advice!
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Date: 10/1/2023 9:07:00 AM
Goodness me what an enthralling read Anne-Lise, and clever. I see no contest, a shame this would have been a certain win. I see you have taken Sunshine Smile out, but you are our Sunshine on Soup. Loved Sunshine Smile but love Anne-Lise as much. HUGS AND AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/28/2023 7:12:00 AM
An absolutely captivating piece of writing! Wishing you the utmost success in the contest, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2023 7:16:00 AM
- No contest, Las - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/27/2023 12:44:00 PM
Wise words my friend.. I am a very calm person.. very little annoys me or make me angry... sometimes bad drivers annoy me though lol..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:07:00 PM
- Untruths really annoy me, S.O. - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 9/27/2023 10:52:00 AM
Nice Epigram. Like the lines, "If you have a short fuse, learn to lose"
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:04:00 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 9/27/2023 9:05:00 AM
Yes, Anne-Lise, a quick temper can be disastrous. Cute pig. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 10:52:00 AM
- Thank you for reading my poem, Sara - Always a pleasure :) - hugs
Date: 9/27/2023 8:41:00 AM
A fantastic write. The best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Have a glorious day.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 10:50:00 AM
- Jerry, greatly appreciate your comment ... thank you :) - hugs
Date: 9/27/2023 5:41:00 AM
Wonderful. God bless you, love the pic. Much love, Gina
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 10:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Gina :) - hugs
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