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The merciless judgment where the fruit fell subject to decay ~ Trembling in the fight from root to crown hurtful and bitter ~ Fateful in strong storm causing chaos ~ With a sticky hand at the end of the dance blowing south 28/09/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Michael Tor

Date: 2/3/2022 5:02:00 PM

How did I miss this one? Wonderfully written...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/15/2021 11:40:00 AM

A nice creative write on the fall season. Sun is out today after a brief snowfall yesterday. Nicely written. love phyl

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/4/2021 2:41:00 PM

May we keep a little color from the Autumn before it burns into winter, nicely done Sunshine :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/2/2021 12:33:00 PM

What a creative write. Pretty fall leaves. I love the fall time of the year. Wish it would last longer. Have a great/blessed day................................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/30/2021 1:11:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise...I was taking a break...Fun...,stuck on a level of CC,ugh? A creative write,.... Pangie

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/30/2021 9:50:00 AM

Inspired from a scene of nature and wise words so thought provoking dear Anne... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/30/2021 8:22:00 AM

The decay of autumn ushers in a crystal clear winter(Hopefully) very nice indeed Anne-Lise...Delice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2021 2:08:00 AM

A beautiful picture and poem. Life alas destines us to death, but out of that life will be resurrected. Hugs.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/28/2021 10:20:00 PM

I love your poetry, but Anne-Lise this is a real gem!!!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/28/2021 1:37:00 PM

WoW! Anne-Lise, This is so well written. I echo what Judy said. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis

Judy Ball

Date: 9/28/2021 1:06:00 PM

WoW! Beautifully and well described this is quite the view of Autumn. Well done., God Bless, JB

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/28/2021 12:09:00 PM

Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Anne, I hope you are keeping well. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/28/2021 12:06:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile a beautiful poem about autumn. Hugs.

Silent One

Date: 9/28/2021 10:45:00 AM

Interesting use of metaphor here... Nice to still see you around my friend