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- Ruthless -

The merciless judgment
                                  where the fruit fell
                                  subject to decay
                                                 ~
                                  Trembling in the fight
                                  from root to crown
                                  hurtful and bitter
                                                 ~
                                  Fateful
                                  in strong storm
                                  causing chaos
                                                 ~
                                  With a sticky hand
                                  at the end of the dance
                                  blowing south



                                              28/09/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Michael Tor Date: 2/3/2022 5:02:00 PM How did I miss this one? Wonderfully written... Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/15/2021 11:40:00 AM A nice creative write on the fall season. Sun is out today after a brief snowfall yesterday. Nicely written. love phyl Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/4/2021 2:41:00 PM May we keep a little color from the Autumn before it burns into winter, nicely done Sunshine :) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/2/2021 12:33:00 PM What a creative write. Pretty fall leaves. I love the fall time of the year. Wish it would last longer. Have a great/blessed day................................ Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/30/2021 1:11:00 PM Hi Anne Lise...I was taking a break...Fun...,stuck on a level of CC,ugh? A creative write,.... Pangie Login to Reply

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/30/2021 9:50:00 AM Inspired from a scene of nature and wise words so thought provoking dear Anne... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani Login to Reply

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 9/30/2021 8:22:00 AM The decay of autumn ushers in a crystal clear winter(Hopefully) very nice indeed Anne-Lise...Delice Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/29/2021 2:08:00 AM A beautiful picture and poem. Life alas destines us to death, but out of that life will be resurrected. Hugs. Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/28/2021 10:20:00 PM I love your poetry, but Anne-Lise this is a real gem!!!! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 9/28/2021 1:37:00 PM WoW! Anne-Lise, This is so well written. I echo what Judy said. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 9/28/2021 1:06:00 PM WoW! Beautifully and well described this is quite the view of Autumn. Well done., God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/28/2021 12:09:00 PM Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Anne, I hope you are keeping well. Tom Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/28/2021 12:06:00 PM Hello Sunshine Smile a beautiful poem about autumn. Hugs. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 9/28/2021 10:45:00 AM Interesting use of metaphor here... Nice to still see you around my friend Login to Reply