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- Pic Motifs--Visual 2

Tempter shrouds his cold flame 
hovers dwelling in pleasure,
with no remorse 
to lay a kiss
on the sleeping soul at their weakest
as they lodge in fear.

11/18/2017

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Anisha Dutta Date: 11/22/2017 12:27:00 PM Congrats Eve to win top on your visualisation Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 11/21/2017 4:44:00 PM Eve, oh so deep and dark, congratulations on your win ! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/21/2017 4:26:00 PM Excellent take on this visual which was open to so many different interpretations, Eve! ~ Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/20/2017 11:52:00 PM Wow, what a great job of it, Eve. Congrats on your top win. Login to Reply

Afzal Nusker Date: 11/20/2017 9:42:00 PM Excellent work, Eve. Congrats on your first place win. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/20/2017 4:26:00 PM Congrats on your top win Eve Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/20/2017 2:31:00 PM incredible development of images with an ending which left me on edge, eve...finest congrats on your bestest win and thanks for sharing this gem!..huggs Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 11/20/2017 3:04:00 PM Thank you, Nette,, Hugs Eve ~`*

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/20/2017 1:14:00 PM This picture was the popular one and you did a fantastic job Eve! I am so happy to see this entry get First place! I think this picture is Nette's favorite too. I really liked it too but the world map was a better choice for me. Congratulations! : ) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2017 12:43:00 PM - A well deserved first place dear Eve, congratulations ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/18/2017 12:08:00 PM Very nicely done, Eve. I bet this picture is the most popular one. I honestly couldn't think of a thing for the other two!! Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 11/18/2017 11:56:00 AM This is a spooky image and you created creepy image... In the cyber world you never know if people are what they say.. Good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/18/2017 10:47:00 AM I really enjoyed reading your delightfully frightening write! You have spooked me by this incredibly dark, but wondrous poem! I love poems like this, they are cleverly scary and truthful at times, but can be remedied! As we all delve into a depressive stance at times...we can get out of it also...trust me, I know from a harsh experience! Great work my friend!! Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/18/2017 1:31:00 AM ohhhhhhh now thats scarey and creepy, the one who hides in shadows, a nightmare, this is like a horror film poem! Good luck in contest! Login to Reply