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Rakotzbrücke (Rakotz Bridge): Kromlau, Germany:

The power I yearn to catch A surplus beauty overflowing hearts Dew settles, sprinkled gently a wet blanket Star leather leads me into unknown territory My senses are imprisoned and takes my breath Through a crack in the window I can see this magnificent In a moment, soft breeze of the evening an amazing view Hypnotised by the nature and it's miraculous glow The image of happiness, on the menu this evening Cobwebs of dream seekers hidden magic In four chambers one corner dusty twilight appears Under silk covers rising and falling oceans mist over Back breathing from the salted well drawing a bridge of sighs Under a cradle of moonshine drunken beams starlight Rivers of jewels running down the mountain Inside droplets our soul is set free Dew drowning under the fountains Of eternal beauty enveloped A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 27.01.2017 (01 - 17) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Lynn Marie

Date: 2/18/2017 6:10:00 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful. The title drew me in and your tranquil words kept me here for several reads. The imagery is stunning and I feel as if I have experienced a spiritual renewal. A superb collaboration and a wonderful example of the power of words to feel all emotions. blessings, lynn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2017 7:19:00 AM

- Lynn, thank you for your lovely comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/12/2017 11:08:00 AM

I also like the colour yellow, my bedroom is yellow. Perfect Blance makes me feel Like I am in that spot.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2017 11:15:00 AM

- My bedroom is yellow too :) - Thank you for your lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/1/2017 1:09:00 PM

That is one awesome picture it looks like a time portal into the unknown. Love the poem Anne Lise and Liam love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2017 1:28:00 PM

- I love the picture :) - Phyllis, thank you for your lovely comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/31/2017 8:42:00 AM

This is really fabulous, both of you:) and what a stunning picture! I'm saving it, Anne-lise:) a 7:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2017 7:40:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments a 7, saving and visit, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/29/2017 12:53:00 PM

The image is fabulous, your imagery is breathtaking - a fabulous collaboration Anne Lise you and Liam write so well together:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2017 12:58:00 PM

- A pleasure that you enjoy it, Jan :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phillip Garcia

Date: 1/28/2017 7:28:00 PM

What a fascinating poem, it's eloquent and lovely while rich in depth and meaning. I've read it a few times and keep coming away with something new and different each time. Great collaborative effort, to be sure.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2017 6:05:00 AM

- A pleasure that you enjoy it, Phillip :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2017 8:14:00 AM

A beautiful collaboration...love the "bridge of sighs"...best wishes..Have a great weekend Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 8:21:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments and visit, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/28/2017 4:35:00 AM

Beautiful collab,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:17:00 AM

- The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Harry :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/28/2017 1:43:00 AM

Another mesmerising collaboration! A seven to each of you: Dearest Anne- Lise and Liam!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:17:00 AM

- The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it :) - Thank you for your lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/27/2017 10:07:00 PM

Excellent both of you Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:16:00 AM

- The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Eve :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/27/2017 8:12:00 PM

Lovely you two, thank you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:13:00 AM

- The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it :) - Thank you for your lovely comments , Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/27/2017 5:21:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:13:00 AM

- The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Dorian :) - Thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/27/2017 4:53:00 PM

your pen shone golden thought this dear friend a pleasure mixing ink with you anne lise i pray you have a blessed beautiful weekend pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:03:00 AM

- Always a pleasure, my friend Liam :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/27/2017 3:38:00 PM

Now you two have simply re-painted that amazing image, what a beautiful, serene poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:12:00 AM

- The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it, Arthur :) - Thank you for your lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/27/2017 2:09:00 PM

Wow, what a beautiful collaboration. This was fantastic, both poets really shine in this wonderful piece of writing. Bravo to both of you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2017 7:11:00 AM

- The first co-write by Liam and myself this new year :) - A pleasure that you enjoy it :) - Thank you for your lovely comments , Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)