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- Paradise Peace -

There is a place where you may rest in peace A train leaves the station Another train derails A tear falls slowly down from heaven a place A broken tear of silver it is to shine on the ground There is a place where you may rest in peace Desert without watering hole you can not manage it more A frozen rose will never pass away You know that morning will come Your eyes ask me silent Do you love me There is a place where you may rest in peace No one knows the end of life Or if there is a reason to sing - A-L Andresen :) 22.08.2014 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/5/2014 6:33:00 AM
So nicely pictured, i like ittt... A great peice indeed
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Date: 9/5/2014 6:36:00 AM
- Malik,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2014 7:28:00 AM
Anna-Lise, this reminds me of a work Bob Dylan may write.. It's deep and can be read in many ways. I pray now, you always have peace !
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Date: 9/1/2014 7:31:00 AM
- Dave,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/31/2014 8:34:00 AM
Sad tragic images.. Well written indeed..:) hugs hugs :)/// olive eloisa GBU
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Date: 8/31/2014 8:54:00 AM
- Not sad .... just deep thoughts :)) - Olive,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2014 7:24:00 AM
Good morning Anne Lise, This is one of your best poems in my estimation. It is very tight and concise with dark elements. Great images. It truly has merit. Keep up the good work. Have a pleasant day. Take care. Earl
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Date: 8/28/2014 7:37:00 AM
- Earl, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2014 10:42:00 PM
U TIGHTrolled a heap of truth into this one. THis is no kitchen poem. THe last line is something special. NO ONE KNOWS, but everyone pretends to have all the answers to life and death's mysteries!~ WOW!
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Date: 8/26/2014 3:36:00 AM
- I do not know anyone in our century who have risen from the dead ..... no one can tell :)) - JSL, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2014 6:14:00 AM
Excellent poem. Very delightful to read it. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 8/25/2014 8:22:00 AM
- Ravi, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2014 2:49:00 AM
Anne Lise what a beautiful Poem, so delightful to read, take care my friend............Vera............
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Date: 8/25/2014 8:21:00 AM
- Vera, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2014 10:00:00 PM
A beautiful and deep write Anne...love
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:32:00 AM
- Joseph, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2014 9:04:00 PM
What a beautiful write here. Very inspiring.
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:32:00 AM
- Kimberly, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2014 1:32:00 PM
Wow thats was a great read. Thanks for the welcome comment. And all I can say is wow. Such a portrait of beauty and sadness. Looking forward to reading more.
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:31:00 AM
- James, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2014 1:03:00 PM
more peace to you, anne... congrats on all your wins with huggs
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Date: 8/24/2014 1:19:00 PM
- Always nice to see you :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2014 11:57:00 AM
Wow! This is a great inspirational poem my dear friend Anne Lise. I am so delighted to read this tonight. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well ( I mean, belated thanks) for your precious time visiting and commenting on my latest writes. More blessings t you and hope you have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 8/24/2014 12:12:00 PM
- Thank you my dear friend Leonora .... "Good Friends are angels who lift us up when our wings have forgotten how it is to fly" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2014 6:49:00 AM
Peaceful, serene, and with such a joyous feel. Striking beauty in the image of the frozen rose. Reading this made my morning.
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Date: 8/24/2014 6:53:00 AM
- Dear Monterey, life counted not of number of breaths we take... but of number of moments that take our breath away :) - Thanks for your lovely visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2014 12:38:00 AM
breath takingly beautiful Anne Lise hugs sry for slow reply
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Date: 8/24/2014 5:01:00 AM
- Shadow, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 5:27:00 PM
Interesting lyrics..Thanks for stopping by..Riding by the restaurant, there are two signs on the building one was on open the other said closed..Sara
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Date: 8/24/2014 5:00:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you,Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 4:30:00 PM
A 7 for this one. I loved it. That is the place I want to go. Blessings always... Lucilla
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Date: 8/23/2014 4:36:00 PM
- Dear Lucilla, your friendship is like a cup of chocolate, it makes me warm and happy :) - Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 1:20:00 PM
what joy this brings, anne... you made my coming sunday a sanctuary of peace... huggs
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Date: 8/23/2014 1:24:00 PM
- A happy and cheerful heart will spread joy everywhere..... :)) - Sweet friend, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 11:59:00 AM
Great piece and it is coming from the heart. Life is just temporary, let us treasure it! Thanks for sharing. God bless!
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Date: 8/23/2014 12:59:00 PM
- Life is full of joys - Fill your days with color - Estela, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 9:14:00 AM
A pensive mood that does not try to evade reality. We all know where we're heading for; perhaps we have to be more aware of pitfalls along the way. Beautiful poem, Anne Lise. /x/ paul
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Date: 8/23/2014 12:44:00 PM
- There will always be pitfalls along the way .... but, it is what we learn from - Paul, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 9:07:00 AM
No one knows where the life will have its end, rightly said. Without fulfilling the desires, peaceful resting is impossible. But, that's not also end in itself. Nice and very nicely presented. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 8/23/2014 1:04:00 PM
- Life counted not of number of breaths we take... but of number of moments that take our breath away :) - Bl, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 8:51:00 AM
I liked the last two lines lot. Thanks for your kinds words. Maybe one day I will get to Norway. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/23/2014 1:09:00 PM
Must luck follow you every day ...hope your life will be like a blooming summer day :) - Matthew, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 4:42:00 AM
The heart longs for such a place and the soul in perpetuity is after it, till a day we inadvertently, find! Beautifully presented, dear friend , Anne!
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Date: 8/23/2014 6:13:00 AM
- Yes, it's true my friend Demetrios - thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2014 3:03:00 AM
Taoist and uniquely mystical Anne, I love poetry that's beautifully perplexing. I guess I'm saying you are a complicated Poetess. This dreamy poem tells me to live is to know Anne. " Your eyes ask me silent..." J.A.B.
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Date: 8/23/2014 6:12:00 AM
.... Thanks .... I'm blushing :))) - Justin, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2014 4:16:00 PM
Sunshine...peace is sought after...Yes, it is connected to Love. Love makes everything paradise indeed. Hugs
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Date: 8/23/2014 6:10:00 AM
- Dear Eileen,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2014 4:15:00 PM
This is sad Anne-Lise....many hugs Tim
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Date: 8/22/2014 4:17:00 PM
- Not sad .... just deep thoughts :)) - Tim,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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