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- Paradise Peace -

There is a place
where you may rest in peace
A train leaves the station
Another train derails


A tear falls slowly
down from heaven a place
A broken tear of silver
it is to shine on the ground


There is a place
where you may rest in peace
Desert without watering hole
you can not manage it more


A frozen rose will never pass away
You know that morning will come
Your eyes ask me silent
Do you love me


There is a place
where you may rest in peace
No one knows the end of life
Or if there is a reason to sing






- A-L Andresen :) 22.08.2014
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Ma Yaseen Date: 9/5/2014 6:33:00 AM So nicely pictured, i like ittt... A great peice indeed Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/5/2014 6:36:00 AM - Malik,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/31/2014 8:34:00 AM Sad tragic images.. Well written indeed..:) hugs hugs :)/// olive eloisa GBU Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2014 8:54:00 AM - Not sad .... just deep thoughts :)) - Olive,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker Date: 8/28/2014 7:24:00 AM Good morning Anne Lise, This is one of your best poems in my estimation. It is very tight and concise with dark elements. Great images. It truly has merit. Keep up the good work. Have a pleasant day. Take care. Earl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/28/2014 7:37:00 AM - Earl, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/25/2014 10:42:00 PM U TIGHTrolled a heap of truth into this one. THis is no kitchen poem. THe last line is something special. NO ONE KNOWS, but everyone pretends to have all the answers to life and death's mysteries!~ WOW! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2014 3:36:00 AM - I do not know anyone in our century who have risen from the dead ..... no one can tell :)) - JSL, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/25/2014 6:14:00 AM Excellent poem. Very delightful to read it. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2014 8:22:00 AM - Ravi, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan Date: 8/25/2014 2:49:00 AM Anne Lise what a beautiful Poem, so delightful to read, take care my friend............Vera............ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2014 8:21:00 AM - Vera, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 8/24/2014 10:00:00 PM A beautiful and deep write Anne...love Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2014 2:32:00 AM - Joseph, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kimberly Ruiz Date: 8/24/2014 9:04:00 PM What a beautiful write here. Very inspiring. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2014 2:32:00 AM - Kimberly, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Mitchell Date: 8/24/2014 1:32:00 PM Wow thats was a great read. Thanks for the welcome comment. And all I can say is wow. Such a portrait of beauty and sadness. Looking forward to reading more. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2014 2:31:00 AM - James, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/24/2014 1:03:00 PM more peace to you, anne... congrats on all your wins with huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2014 1:19:00 PM - Always nice to see you :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun Date: 8/24/2014 11:57:00 AM Wow! This is a great inspirational poem my dear friend Anne Lise. I am so delighted to read this tonight. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well ( I mean, belated thanks) for your precious time visiting and commenting on my latest writes. More blessings t you and hope you have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2014 12:12:00 PM - Thank you my dear friend Leonora .... "Good Friends are angels who lift us up when our wings have forgotten how it is to fly" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 8/24/2014 6:49:00 AM Peaceful, serene, and with such a joyous feel. Striking beauty in the image of the frozen rose. Reading this made my morning. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2014 6:53:00 AM - Dear Monterey, life counted not of number of breaths we take... but of number of moments that take our breath away :) - Thanks for your lovely visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/24/2014 12:38:00 AM breath takingly beautiful Anne Lise hugs sry for slow reply Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2014 5:01:00 AM - Shadow, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/23/2014 5:27:00 PM Interesting lyrics..Thanks for stopping by..Riding by the restaurant, there are two signs on the building one was on open the other said closed..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2014 5:00:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you,Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/23/2014 4:30:00 PM A 7 for this one. I loved it. That is the place I want to go. Blessings always... Lucilla Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 4:36:00 PM - Dear Lucilla, your friendship is like a cup of chocolate, it makes me warm and happy :) - Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/23/2014 1:20:00 PM what joy this brings, anne... you made my coming sunday a sanctuary of peace... huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 1:24:00 PM - A happy and cheerful heart will spread joy everywhere..... :)) - Sweet friend, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Estela Canama Date: 8/23/2014 11:59:00 AM Great piece and it is coming from the heart. Life is just temporary, let us treasure it! Thanks for sharing. God bless! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 12:59:00 PM - Life is full of joys - Fill your days with color - Estela, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 8/23/2014 9:14:00 AM A pensive mood that does not try to evade reality. We all know where we're heading for; perhaps we have to be more aware of pitfalls along the way. Beautiful poem, Anne Lise. /x/ paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 12:44:00 PM - There will always be pitfalls along the way .... but, it is what we learn from - Paul, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 8/23/2014 9:07:00 AM No one knows where the life will have its end, rightly said. Without fulfilling the desires, peaceful resting is impossible. But, that's not also end in itself. Nice and very nicely presented. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 1:04:00 PM - Life counted not of number of breaths we take... but of number of moments that take our breath away :) - Bl, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish Date: 8/23/2014 8:51:00 AM I liked the last two lines lot. Thanks for your kinds words. Maybe one day I will get to Norway. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 1:09:00 PM Must luck follow you every day ...hope your life will be like a blooming summer day :) - Matthew, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/23/2014 4:42:00 AM The heart longs for such a place and the soul in perpetuity is after it, till a day we inadvertently, find! Beautifully presented, dear friend , Anne! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 6:13:00 AM - Yes, it's true my friend Demetrios - thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner Date: 8/23/2014 3:03:00 AM Taoist and uniquely mystical Anne, I love poetry that's beautifully perplexing. I guess I'm saying you are a complicated Poetess. This dreamy poem tells me to live is to know Anne. " Your eyes ask me silent..." J.A.B. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 6:12:00 AM .... Thanks .... I'm blushing :))) - Justin, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/22/2014 4:16:00 PM Sunshine...peace is sought after...Yes, it is connected to Love. Love makes everything paradise indeed. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2014 6:10:00 AM - Dear Eileen,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 8/22/2014 4:15:00 PM This is sad Anne-Lise....many hugs Tim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/22/2014 4:17:00 PM - Not sad .... just deep thoughts :)) - Tim,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 8/22/2014 3:28:00 PM this is very poignant, deep. it is a great read thank you. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/22/2014 4:10:00 PM - Maurice,thanks for your visit and comment on my poem: - Paradise Peace - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)