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Cottage- I think I need to live here.:



The life light shimmers in the air
Love and delights

Death and pain
Drowsy in numbness

The leaves have never known
Embalmed darkness with grief

Cold winter is coming soon
Silver bells and white snow

Stardust, northern lights and moonlight
While wonder and guesses










01.10.2016
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
(unrhymed couplets)
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Date: 10/23/2016 10:23:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, These couplets rendered under the title of "October" (to me) are quite meaningful and bespeak definite images which compare and contrast with one another in a very interesting fashion. What an interesting technique, with the image-statement first, then followed projected result in each couplet. At least this is what I both see and interpret. Short verses in this instance, written cogently and with an immediacy, can be very powerful to the reader. TR/FAV!! Best, Gary
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Date: 10/23/2016 11:57:00 AM
- Sometimes my thoughts behind a poem .... is "bigger than the words" in the lines - Some realize it, others do not - Thank you for your words that mean a lot to me, Gary - Special thanks for a 7 + fav. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2016 9:19:00 AM
Fantastic Couplets, Anne- Lise! Beautifully painted piece for the month of October dear friend. I enjoyed it!:)) A 7! Sending you my love and prayers! Best to you always!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs! D.
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Date: 10/15/2016 11:39:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Dorian :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/6/2016 2:09:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, your words paint a wonderful image in my mind.
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Date: 10/6/2016 2:19:00 PM
- Chris, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/5/2016 7:33:00 AM
Very well described:) I like the third stanza, Anne:)
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Date: 10/6/2016 2:18:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/2/2016 1:11:00 PM
Great words Sunshine x well written x
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:17:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/2/2016 8:35:00 AM
I love to read poem that concern with NATURE. I love reading it so much. Thanks for posting..........A.M.
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Date: 10/2/2016 11:03:00 AM
- Afolabi, thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/2/2016 6:45:00 AM
Love this line "Stardust, northern lights and moonlight". I felt like as if having the exact feeling you had while writing this, Anne. ;)
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Date: 10/2/2016 7:26:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2016 6:27:00 PM
You give Autumn a new perspective of life dear, Anne-Lise! Very well done!
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Date: 10/2/2016 7:26:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2016 4:59:00 PM
welcome to autumn's show, anne.. when do the norther lights appear?.. a beauty this one.. happy huggs
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Date: 10/2/2016 7:25:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2016 4:07:00 PM
I love the seasons...cant wait to go sledding with the kiddies.
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Date: 10/2/2016 7:25:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and your comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2016 2:50:00 PM
Silver bells and white snow..Oh cant wait..I open Winter with open arms..Just lovely imagery sweet Sunshine.
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Date: 10/1/2016 2:58:00 PM
- A pleasant surprise to see you, Charmaine :) - Thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2016 2:02:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive write Anne Lise - oh how the year is flying by so quickly - can we bypass winter and go straight to spring though!:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2016 2:05:00 PM
- Agree, winter is too dark and cold - Thanks for visiting and your comments, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)