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- Morning Star -

Phosphorus
 ~ great and unique

 Twinkle ..
 ~ glowing jewel
    ~ Twinkle little star

 ... lightbearer
~  from God

   The brightest ...
 Glowing,
 glorious
 and pretty
     ~ in the new morning
            the big star of them all

      ... I
   ~ always admire it






26 - 05 - 2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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- Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest
Line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

5th place in the contest

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Funom Makama Date: 6/8/2020 8:47:00 PM Congratulations on your high score, this is a lovely piece. Creativity at its best. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2020 9:53:00 AM - Thank you very much Funom, for the visit, congratulations and your supportive comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman Date: 6/8/2020 3:42:00 PM Early in the morning seeing this morning star is like seeing hope for the new day. It always brings a smile to me. "Light bearer of God" stands out as words to ponder. Congratulations, with a smile, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2020 9:52:00 AM - Thank you very much for the visit, congratulations and your supportive comment, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/8/2020 8:20:00 AM Phosphorus glowing jewel..so creative and witty Anne. Glad I got to read your beautiful words. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:51:00 PM - Many thanks Aditi, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/7/2020 7:39:00 PM A lovely yalto with a spiritual touch. Nice starter word - Phosphorus. I applaud your talent, congratulations! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:50:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2020 3:16:00 PM so sweet, Sunshine. Congrats in the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:50:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/7/2020 7:34:00 AM Amazing poem and imagery, Anne-Lise:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest! *After a few rereads, I realize I should've placed this higher. My apologies.* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:08:00 PM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JCB Brul Date: 6/3/2020 7:58:00 AM So dainty poem. Very heart-warming. Keep coming. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:48:00 PM - Many thanks, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 6/2/2020 9:33:00 PM Awesome poem. Love to star gaze. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:47:00 PM Many thanks for your valuable comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 5/31/2020 9:29:00 AM A fitting poetic tribute to this star which many do not even bother to look at twice, yet you give it light and beauty, Anne-Lise! Have a lovely day. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:47:00 PM - Many thanks, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/29/2020 11:04:00 PM Brilliant! A lovely poem, Anne-Lise. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:47:00 PM Many thanks for your valuable comments, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/29/2020 8:56:00 AM Nice little yalto, Anne-lise:) hope all is well with you:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:46:00 PM - Many thanks, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 5/27/2020 1:01:00 PM Oh so beautiful. Very nice! I hope all is well :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:46:00 PM - Many thanks, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/27/2020 1:45:00 AM I think Noway inspires you a great deal my friend - your poems have a soft passionate sensitve fragility about them which depict awesome nature scenes and wonderful skies at night - but of course it your poetic talent my Norwegian soul sister that is able to paint this on a poetic canvas. Love and hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:45:00 PM - Many thanks for your valuable comments, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 5/26/2020 2:19:00 PM your imagery is so beautiful, a joy to read Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:45:00 PM - Many thanks for your valuable comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/26/2020 1:42:00 PM An amazing sight to see, It's amazing through a telescope, it has phases like the moon and when I saw it it was a quarter crescent, its not a very hospitable planet though. Hope you're well Anne. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:11:00 PM - Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/26/2020 12:57:00 PM Lovely ode to the morning star--a charming write, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:10:00 PM - Many thanks, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 5/26/2020 12:48:00 PM Wonderful write Anne, best wishes Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2020 1:09:00 PM - Many thanks, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)