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28.08.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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NO 1239
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

10th place in the contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 8:20:00 AM

Love the shape and the “crunchy” leaves! Congratulations!

Karen Croft

Date: 9/3/2023 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations. Very nice!!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2023 1:24:00 AM

Very beautiful artwork, Anne-lise:) congratulations:)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/1/2023 11:27:00 AM

Wonderfully creative, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win! Warm autumn hugs and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 11:56:00 AM

- Thank you for the congratulations, comment and warm hugs, Sam :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/1/2023 11:22:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your contest's well-deserved win, Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 11:55:00 AM

- Thank you for the congratulations, Las :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 2:45:00 PM

a really creative visual you came up with through poetry. Awesome

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 12:33:00 AM

- Many thanks, Andrea ... a pleasure to share with you :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 8/29/2023 11:36:00 AM

Creative design and poem. May you win the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 11:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/29/2023 10:01:00 AM

Amazing!!! What a creative/fun ~ write/picture/shape. A fun read. I think you have tooooo much time on your hands. Hahaha!!!! "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a great/fun day writing/making shapes............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 10:11:00 AM

- I have 24 hours in a day ... like everyone else, Paula ... takes a while ... but fun to make - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/29/2023 5:51:00 AM

WOW! Awesome design. BIG congrats in advance for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 6:05:00 AM

- In Norwegian we say : "mange om beinet"... an expression that describes a tough competition :) - ... or : Do not eat the meat, before the moose is shot :) - Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/29/2023 4:24:00 AM

Anne-Lise, fun and creative, best of luck in the contest, hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 4:32:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Tania :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/29/2023 1:02:00 AM

This is a masterpiece indeed - a true masterpiece. I just love it. My husband has a nickname - MOOSE! A fave! Love this so. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 1:21:00 AM

- Your husband: a man of nature (I think, from pictures I have seen) - Many thanks for your comment and especially your fave :) - hugs

Judy Ball

Date: 8/28/2023 10:41:00 PM

Loved this Anne-Lise but I'm afraid I'm on the side of the moose. I remember a friend of mine once during hunting season who was driving through the country with her husband. They saw a deer grazing in a ditch and her husband grabbed his rifle. She began to cry and kept swerving the car each side of the road to throw him off balance and also scare the deer away. Boy was he mad but she saved the deer. Good write. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 1:19:00 AM

- I'm on the moose side too, Judy...glad your friend saved the deer...I have deer in my yard (in the evenings) and they are beautiful - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/28/2023 8:15:00 PM

Oh so Cute !! That is adorable. Can his name be Bambi ? And don't let them shoot him Anne-Lise Loved the shape and loved your poem. First class all the way.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 1:14:00 AM

- You can name him Bambi ... but, it probably fits better on a deer, S.V. - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/28/2023 4:12:00 PM

nicely written, and so creative, a very enjoyable poem, thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 1:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Yann :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/28/2023 4:08:00 PM

Nicely written, my friend, with compelling imagery. Your cleverness, creativity, and entertaining style make for an enjoyable read. Best wishes for the contest, a sure winner though.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 1:10:00 AM

- You are very creative in this form, Las ... you are the expert - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/28/2023 3:32:00 PM

lol your witty and creative and fun to read, I always despised hunting, don't like to see animals hurt, but I do have hunters in the family and they do love the hunt, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 1:07:00 AM

- No one in my family has hunted .... I know we have to have food on the table ... but could never kill an animal ... not even a fish - Many thanks for your comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2023 1:54:00 PM

Very well constructed and I hope it is not seen by a hunter because he could blow away my screen. Thanks for sharing your talents with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 1:04:00 AM

- Thanks for the funny comment, Sara :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/28/2023 12:26:00 PM

I have no idea how you create these, Anne-Lise, but they are so much fun to read!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2023 12:41:00 PM

- ... and fun to make, Ilene :))) - It's the funniest moos I've seen ... but, I haven't seen them very often :))) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs