- Miss Gunda -

Miss Gunda moved into my house
      she will be living here for several years
      I do not know how long
      but she is warmly welcomed
      She is curious
      the eyes moves from room to room
      - spends a lot of time measuring every millimeter
      Things suddenly disappear ...
      yes even the charging cord for the phone
      We are looking high and low
      The issue is presented to Gunda
      As a thief in broad daylight
      of her good deeds, she admitted
      Although she is guilty
      I have found the best robot vacuum cleaner
      ... she does an fabulous work
      and still live here 







       29/06/2021
       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:22:00 AM
Oh how cute, i love this pic and the way you write about your new residential tenant. Really lovely Sunshine smile, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/30/2021 5:27:00 PM
Ah, I hear they work really nice, I still have an old fashioned broom stick, lol, I'm such a witch, :)
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Date: 6/30/2021 4:14:00 PM
It's wonderful to have help with the housework. A charming picture and poem. Hugs, Evelyn :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/1/2021 6:45:00 AM
- Yes, and Miss Gunda I only paid her once ... and she's happy with it - Thank you very much for your comments, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2021 2:28:00 PM
aww how cute is the pic and poem, son wants me to get one of the robotic vacuums I am not so sure:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/1/2021 6:41:00 AM
- I'm very pleased Jan, but I did not buy the one that was cheapest ... mine can vacuum and wash with a wet mop :) - Thumbs up :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2021 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful dog and certainly a beautiful poem. I suspect that you both are blessed my friend. A fav.... God bless...
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Date: 7/1/2021 6:43:00 AM
- Just a poem for fun Robert, but many thanks for your comments and fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2021 4:55:00 AM
A narrative that has interwoven reality and fiction to such a degree that is difficult to tell them apart, dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2021 10:41:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2021 4:51:00 AM
Don't blame you, Gunda is a clean sweap of love. Delightful!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2021 10:40:00 AM
- Robot love never rusts, Jo :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2021 4:35:00 AM
I could do with something like your Gunda. It is not easy to keep the house tidy. Daily mopping floors is tiring. You gave life to her in your wonderful poem
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2021 10:39:00 AM
- Especially not with children or pets ... in the house ... and I can do other things, which is not tiring :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Rama :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2021 1:02:00 AM
Robots have no conscience, so we must excuse her. Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2021 10:35:00 AM
- She's forgiven, Victor ... it was the owner's fault ... do not leave things on the floor - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 10:00:00 PM
Great story told in style, Sunshine:) she'll sure be of immense help to you:)
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Date: 6/30/2021 10:34:00 AM
- An excellent maid, Jo :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 7:36:00 PM
Wonderful, Sunshine Smile! I have always wondered how effective they are. Uh, you seem sold on it.
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Date: 6/30/2021 10:33:00 AM
- Mine is new this week, Milton ... I'm impressed ... can be recommended :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 7:25:00 PM
what an adorable story... love the picture to go with your words, my three little ones are afraid of the vacuum and anything that moves... even a leaf in the wind... loved this, thanks for the laughs, hugs :)
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Date: 6/30/2021 10:31:00 AM
- It sounds like my two little ones ... barking of their own shadow ... but, Miss Gunda is very quiet and it goes just fine ... no barking and no one is afraid ... just curious :) - Thank you very much for visits and comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 3:39:00 PM
A great invention Anne, certainly makes life easier. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2021 10:27:00 AM
- She never says, no when I ask her :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 3:09:00 PM
Miss Gunda has her good and bad points, very much like us people, Anne-Lise! Yours appears to be a harder worker than the one my daughter has....hers is always skiving in some quiet corner :) Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/30/2021 10:26:00 AM
- Miss Gunda is new this year ... maybe she has gone to a better school ... I hope so :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 2:40:00 PM
I'm glad you are good, I enjoyed this fun write, your dog looks curious and serious, very nice picture. kindest regards
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2021 2:58:00 PM
- This is not my private picture ... but a cute picture :) - Many thanks for your comments - glad you enjoy it, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 2:26:00 PM
Fun poem! Mine is named Rosie, and my dog would never ride on it, but may hide from it! He finds Rosie to be rather creepy, but I like her very much, she's a great little helper!
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:56:00 PM
- My dogs do not want to ride them either ... but, no barking just curious about Miss Gunda :) - Many thanks for your comments, BJ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 2:10:00 PM
You told the story very creatively, Anne-Lise. That is a very handy tool to have around the house.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2021 2:20:00 PM
- Vacuuming is hard work ... I love miss Gunda :) - Many thanks for your friendly and lovely comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2021 2:04:00 PM
Nice to know you are ok. Very entertaining piece and nice picture. Fondest regards David in NZ
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:22:00 PM
- A perfect maid ... especially after my back surgery ... thank you very much, David ... nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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