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- Memories On Branches -

I am sure you can hear me weep 
Autumn - I will let you sleep 
As you look death in the eye - through heavenly eyed 
I am with you always - sound of leaves falling silently - unimaginably tired 

Naked, forsaken cold and bleak 
Winter allows the soil and the plants sleep 
During the winter snow and dark gray cloud 
The rivers have been frozen - King Winter is proud 

I hear the birds playing my song 
Spring - throw winter clothes - it was not wrong 
Apple blossoms sprouts and clear blue sky 
This makes me so happy - wish I could fly 

Lightweight shoes and golden hair 
A smile on your face - so easy to care 
Summer is here - feet in the hot sand 
Flowers and butterflies ... oh ... I love my land






26.02.2014
A-L Andresen :)

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Sarah Sublett Date: 8/3/2014 12:52:00 PM This is lovely. Makes me long for each season. Nice write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2014 12:55:00 PM - Spring and summer are my favorites, Sarah - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter Date: 7/26/2014 7:02:00 AM Rich, thought-provoking imagery makes this poem memorable. Yes, I like it. Bravo! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/26/2014 8:02:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Paul. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Nehls Date: 6/17/2014 12:14:00 PM Oh, summer. what a beautiful time of year. Creates a great playground. I know how you feel Anne Lise. Liked it a lot.... Robert. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2014 3:38:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Robert - Have a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 3/10/2014 6:23:00 PM I really liked how you began your poem with autumn and ended it with summer. Great rhyme and beautiful imagery! A wonderful poem, Anne-Lise! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/11/2014 3:53:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kelly - Have a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/5/2014 12:58:00 PM The seasons are wonderfully expressed in your rhyme. It reads like a winner - Connie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2014 1:24:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Connie - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 3/4/2014 1:35:00 PM This beautiful and lovely, Anne! Wish you luck in the contest! Many thanks to you on your congratulatory comments on my contested works in the G.V's series. Thank you once more! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2014 1:42:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Abdulhafeez - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones Date: 3/3/2014 10:06:00 PM This is very lovely...does bring a smile to my face...so sweet Anne Lise..good luck in this contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2014 3:46:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Donna - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jay Loveless Date: 3/1/2014 10:41:00 AM This is beautiful and I enjoyed it greatly. I cant wait for Spring to arrive <3 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 10:59:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jay - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jayne Eggins Date: 3/1/2014 7:53:00 AM You guy are anxious for spring and we cant wait for Autumn... its been a hot summer, lovely poem good luck in the competition :) take care love Jayne x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 8:05:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jayne - Have a great day .... Autumn is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/1/2014 2:33:00 AM may the branches of spring lighten your day, anne.. it;s saturday; time to dance away!.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:22:00 AM - It's a beautiful Saturday :) - the sun shines!! - - - // Anne-Lise :)

James Peranteau Date: 2/28/2014 8:49:00 PM Hello Anne Lise ! Wonderful write here dear poet ! I have one thing I need to say.....were is my spring ? It is still freezing here in Pa., and there are two more winter blasts to come here ! Yikes ! *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend my friend.....much love, james Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:20:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, James - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 2/28/2014 4:11:00 PM nearly here now Anne Lise twenty days to go a lovely poem symbolizing the seasons hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:19:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shadow - Have a great weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller Date: 2/28/2014 1:45:00 PM that's a beautiful expressed poem,nice rhyming,I enjoyed reading it , God bless you, Hugs!Erich Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 2:43:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Erich - Have a great weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama Date: 2/28/2014 10:48:00 AM Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:16:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Funom - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin Date: 2/28/2014 10:33:00 AM Season's sensations captured by one inspirational pen in the hand of Anne-Lise. My best 7 chuck Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:15:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Chuck - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda Date: 2/28/2014 8:16:00 AM Awesome as always Anne Lise-- you are such an inspirational to us all Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:15:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kim - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun Date: 2/28/2014 8:07:00 AM This is such a very lovely write my dear friend Anne Lise. A very wonderful image and feelings were expressed here. Embracing this poem & the poet as I was enjoying it thoroughly tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Wish you a great wkend ahead! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:15:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Leonora - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 2/28/2014 8:01:00 AM Excellent beauty of land's memories. A very nicely adorned the memories of past. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my friend, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:14:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, bl. - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 2/28/2014 7:20:00 AM More lovely, soothing images flowing from your pen. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 7:29:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 2/28/2014 7:10:00 AM Wow this is one of yor best poems i feel. Gorgeous in imagery, memories and rhyme scheme. Lovely to read u again. Tc. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 7:28:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments,S.K. - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll Date: 2/27/2014 7:37:00 PM Nicely penned Anne, I like this one. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 2:56:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ken - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne Date: 2/27/2014 2:35:00 PM what a beautiful write : ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 2:55:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jack - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/27/2014 10:29:00 AM you fill each season with different flavors so delightful, anne... norway rules and so does this stunning write... happy springtime with huggs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/27/2014 11:30:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Nette - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shaista Aziz Date: 2/27/2014 6:49:00 AM a nice poem anne lise ! flowers and butterflies ...oh I love my land. loved this line!!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/27/2014 6:51:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shaista - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/27/2014 5:21:00 AM :) I can envision you with the sun in your hair, Anne Lise. My favorite line? Spring- throw winter clothes...Yes. There is nothing as magical as the arrival of spring. You captured that beauty. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/27/2014 6:36:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Eileen - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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