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Border politics Donald Duck Child without parents 19.06.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved The lune is also known as the American Haiku 5-3-5 Syllables Any topic, meter, rhyme, metaphor allowed

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/7/2023 8:32:00 AM

It’s 2023 now, we have millions of illegals Crime rampant. Border children, are lost so the Mexican Cartels have killed many. China and also Mexico are making millions shipping Fentanyl here. We are losing over 100,000 Americans a year. Including children. It looks like. colored candy, A country with no borders is not a country.plus Chinese coming via Canada. We won’t survive longer. Plus countries are sending criminals not families. We never had barbed wire here. Europe will cheer as we go down in flames.Pangie

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 7/4/2018 5:09:00 PM

A great Haiku that touches humanity! A brilliant write dear Anne-Lise! Good to know about the American Haiku.. thank you for sharing.. Stay safe and blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2018 1:38:00 PM

- Besma, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/30/2018 9:50:00 AM

Been missing you Anne-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 1:59:00 PM

- Thank you, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 6/26/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thankfully he changed the policy.. Hope you are well Anne-Lise..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 1:58:00 PM

- Thank you S.O., for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2018 2:33:00 AM

Excellent. Very touching lines. Sad too. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 1:58:00 PM

- Thank you Ravi, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/22/2018 7:27:00 PM

It is worse now his planning on building refugee camps to house over 100,000 , 200,000 people,,, He has no intention to let them go back , but lock them up :(

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 1:57:00 PM

- Thank you Eve, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2018 7:50:00 PM

An interesting one. Thanks for explaining the form, Ann Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 1:57:00 PM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/21/2018 7:02:00 PM

sad :(

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 1:56:00 PM

- Thank you Casarah, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/21/2018 5:45:00 PM

this says so much, I don't think he understands about unity. Well done poetess,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 1:56:00 PM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Pixie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/20/2018 11:54:00 PM

Meaningfully beautiful, Sunshine ... The harsh reality so poetically expressed in just thirteen syllables ... Best wishes for the contest ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lyric Man

Date: 6/20/2018 11:18:00 PM

The four Presidents before Trump all did the same thing, Bush even made it law you had to separate families. They ALL were wrong. Children are not pawns. You hurt a child you will answer to God!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 3:54:00 AM

The invasion of Norway in April 9, 1940 occupied Germany, Denmark and Norway ... they did the same - Separated children and parents .... was it right? ... No, as you say everyone was wrong - I thought we had learned ... we live in 2018 - Everyone is allowed to have their own opinion ... but I think it's madness ! - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/20/2018 8:01:00 PM

I agree with some of Trump's policies but not this one~just downright cruel for the children to be split up from their parents! A well written heartfelt write Anne-Lise; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:06:00 AM

- Mr. Duck is not God ... - God bless America and the rest of the world - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/20/2018 12:57:00 PM

So tragic and so inhumane but so true. Heartbreaking for sure. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 3:01:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 6/20/2018 9:21:00 AM

Well written and brutally true, Anne-Lise. If children are being put into "detention camps", makes you wonder who will be next.//Warren :(

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 3:01:00 PM

- Nothing surprises anymore when it comes from Mr. Duck, Warren - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/20/2018 8:23:00 AM

WOW, have you nailed that Anne-Lise, excellent xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:58:00 PM

- Many thanks Mike, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/20/2018 5:44:00 AM

Pertinent witty writing od a tragic truth! Superb my friend, Anne-Lise. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:58:00 PM

- Many thanks Demetrios, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2018 9:43:00 PM

It's terrible what they are doing to these kids, and congress is silent...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:57:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/19/2018 9:26:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! What timing with your poem here. How true your words are and more so!! You touched a nerve with this one. By the way, I just posted, in the wee-hours of the morning here in Germany a Political Verse poem called, "The Little Children are Crying." I write about this same mindless tragedy and use my "Pied Piper"name for (Trump), and "Mr. Magoo" for his dithering Attorney General, Jeff Sessions, the one who cited the biblical quote used to justify slavery. Superb!! Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:49:00 PM

- It is shocking to see that refugee children are divorced from their families and placed in detention camps in the United States, Gary - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/19/2018 6:12:00 PM

A verse to be seen by all Anne-Lise...when will this all end?...love & light for the children...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:54:00 PM

- Man uses not mothers and children as pawns in a political game ... - Dot.. ! - Many thanks for your visit and comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/19/2018 5:35:00 PM

Amen, Sunshine. Be assured that most of us across the Atlantic are enraged at this terrible situation.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:51:00 PM

- Unworthy treatment of refugee children, Sunlite - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/19/2018 4:07:00 PM

Yes..you are right Anne-Lise..we are in the midst of political games..playing with children's lives..very apt topic.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:37:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/19/2018 2:53:00 PM

Well said Sunshine, it is indeed a sad day for mankind. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2018 3:01:00 PM

- Tom, he takes the children to punish the parents ... what policy is that ? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/19/2018 2:31:00 PM

i heard the children crying on tv.. a dramatic, painful scene, anne... fine job!...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2018 2:37:00 PM

- Trumps policy is inhuman, heartbreaking Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Anderson

Date: 6/19/2018 2:31:00 PM

Excellent topical poem. Very well done. Cheers

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2018 2:33:00 PM

- The Mexican people express a strong condemnation of this cruel and inhumane policy ... and I think the whole world agrees, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2018 2:22:00 PM

BRILLIANT and so topical Anne-lise - he sure needs to 'duck' from all the negative publicity, I hope Mo will love this:-) hugfs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2018 2:34:00 PM

- D. D. have to rethink the policy and prioritize the welfare and rights of these children, Jan - hugs //Anne-Lise :)