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- Love - Sweet - Love -

Hand in hand
                                       Sandy beach with beautiful sunset
                                                            in love

                                    
                                       What could be more romantic than
                                    when the sun is glowing red and orange
                                          melts into the sea somewhere
                               And two who are in love and goes hand in hand

                
                                                       A small box
                                        On his knees in the wet sand beach
                                                     Will you be mine

                                             
                                              She blushes as the sunset
                                                Smiles her lovely smile
                                                        Yes, I would


                                          The sun melts into the sea somewhere
                                    But for a couple in love, the night is still young





08.02.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
("mix poem" )

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Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/14/2014 10:39:00 AM this is so very sweet anne lise deep beautiful piece golden pen Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/14/2014 12:00:00 PM - Thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Liam. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis Date: 3/1/2014 2:08:00 PM Anne Lise This is so sweet and romantic, Full of passion and love. Nice write. Thanks for the congrats on my Taming A Heart poem Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 2:50:00 PM - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Robin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Goodrum Date: 6/3/2013 9:07:00 PM beautiful is all i have to say about this poem Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/4/2013 1:39:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your kind comments, Kevin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/22/2013 12:28:00 PM This charms me no end, anne... a way of sweet passion drifts accross the page... a most woderfu; write as always..:) huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/22/2013 12:30:00 PM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jiril Clemons Date: 5/22/2013 11:39:00 AM Beautiful poem, Anne. I enjoyed it. My name is Jiril Clemons. Check out some of my poetry, you might like it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/22/2013 11:42:00 AM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jiril. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Stacey Law Date: 4/29/2013 4:04:00 AM Yes , this is a lovely poem. The sunset is so warming to vow of devotion Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 4:12:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Stacey. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Deason Date: 4/18/2013 8:31:00 AM lovely poem, sounds so sweet :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/18/2013 9:19:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 4/12/2013 4:32:00 PM love it Anne - Lisa,,,, don't know how I've missed this gem,,,,thank you for reading my Caturday haiku's, you have an awesome weekend xo's ;} Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2013 3:59:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sasha Maharaj Date: 4/8/2013 6:41:00 AM love at it best. :) Love it Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/8/2013 6:48:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sasha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ae S-K Date: 3/21/2013 3:08:00 PM Simply beautiful. :-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2013 3:11:00 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, AE S-K. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Carter Date: 3/17/2013 12:20:00 PM I enjoy reading your work and I learn from them Tank you for that and for your wonderful comments. Tac Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 12:37:00 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala Date: 3/12/2013 9:28:00 PM hi hi hi my sweetest Poetess dearest Anne Lise :) i love this piece so much :) so romantic <3 and yes so beautifully written :) thank you for sharing <3 <3 <3 :) Sk Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2013 2:53:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sean L Sanders Date: 3/7/2013 4:51:00 PM nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2013 9:22:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sean. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dave Timperley Date: 2/22/2013 1:50:00 PM I have always been a romantic at heart. I love the way you put this together and I do love a plan that comes together. Great write Anna-lise God Bless. Dave. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 1:52:00 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dave. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres Date: 2/22/2013 12:04:00 PM So lovely !! Sweet romance at it's best...love it!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 12:19:00 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Perry Date: 2/18/2013 1:44:00 AM i love this its so amazing:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2013 7:27:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Alvez Date: 2/17/2013 8:59:00 AM A beautiful verse for my early morning read...Love really can be joyful! Cynthia Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2013 11:29:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Cynthia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Noel Villarosa Date: 2/15/2013 11:08:00 PM This is evoking a freshness of love affairs harmonizing with nature's kind act. Thanks for sharing this. (^_^) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2013 11:28:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Noel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/15/2013 10:50:00 PM gosh, it also almost looks like that beatlemania contest too. Didn't they have a song called love sweet love? Good stuff, sweetie! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore Date: 2/15/2013 9:31:00 PM Oh the is just beautiful...it has so much emotion and imagery. Good job! Thanks for your comments and always thinking about me..xxoo Holly Moore Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 2/15/2013 9:42:00 AM It's a true magic poem certainly many will remind back, no chance to deny. Thanks my sweet friend for your comment. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2013 11:56:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/15/2013 7:48:00 AM Awwwwww....how sweet and romantic and dreamy! :) Love ya! Thanks for the encouragement you give to me always! God bless you for it! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2013 11:55:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin Date: 2/14/2013 11:53:00 AM Very romantic, Anne Lisa - the sand, the beach, two lovers and the sun melting into the sea. By the way, happy Valentine's Day. Love, daver Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 12:00:00 PM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Daver. - Happy V-Day ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Isaiah Zerbst Date: 2/14/2013 11:17:00 AM Well written. I like it. xoxox Isaiah Zerbst :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 11:24:00 AM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Opondi Ougo Date: 2/14/2013 4:40:00 AM Took me away...sooo deep ...beautiful write...thanks :-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 7:16:00 AM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, W.C. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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