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- Lost and Still Not Found -

a sad complaint song
                                    no emergency signal -
                                       lost the wedding ring





18.03.2019
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Writing Challenge 3 - Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart
2nd place in the contest

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 3/25/2019 8:33:00 AM I've lost our original wedding ring years ago. Can relate to this sadness. Well done Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/25/2019 8:37:00 AM - The original can never be replaced by a new one, Allen - Many thanks for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/22/2019 6:47:00 PM Sad day when the rings get lost. I recently lost the diamond out of my engagement ring. I went many months without my ring before my husband replaced it. I had an attachment to my original stone but I have had to accept that It is gone. Thanks for the visit to my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2019 8:43:00 AM - Sad to lose - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/21/2019 3:13:00 AM Anne-Lise dear soul sister, congratulations on your very fine win - your wonderful poetic words are so full of sadness! Hugs and love Anne-Lise, Jenny Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/22/2019 7:45:00 AM - Many thanks, soul sister for your friendly visit, comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/20/2019 7:04:00 PM Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/22/2019 7:45:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 3/20/2019 4:48:00 PM Anne-Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Senryu and I love the image too ~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/22/2019 7:46:00 AM - Many thanks for my 2nd place in your great contest, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/20/2019 3:03:00 PM These things do happen, Anne-Lise; pleased to read that you haven't lost yours! Congratulations on your podium finish. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/22/2019 7:43:00 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit, comment and congratulations Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/20/2019 6:35:00 AM I like this sad little song. Early in my marriage, after I had taken a shower, I was sitting in my chair and went to play with my ring and it was gone! A sinking feeling... Thankfully I found it in the shower. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2019 9:03:00 AM - Glad it was found ... sad to lose, Kim :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/19/2019 10:26:00 AM It happens sometimes and how disheartening that can be, Nice senryu dear, have a great day hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2019 9:01:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin Date: 3/19/2019 9:49:00 AM One thing for sure, you have not lost your poetic diamonds! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2019 9:56:00 AM - Many thanks Chuck, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/19/2019 1:08:00 AM We went out to buy a replacement ring once, after I could not stop crying. When we returned the babysitter had my "real" ring. The four year old had taken it off me when I fell asleep with her at nap time. Ha! Lovely senryu that reminded me of a great ending to a sad night, where I could find nothing else I wanted. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2019 4:46:00 AM - So glad you found it, Caren :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/18/2019 2:22:00 PM Great Senryu, Sunshine, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 3:11:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/18/2019 1:33:00 PM go find it, anne... a sentimental write remarkably scribed!...happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 3:11:00 PM - Many thanks Nette, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball Date: 3/18/2019 12:07:00 PM Sad but too often this really happens. Sometimes it has to be replaced because it's never found again. Hope you get yours back. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 2:54:00 PM - Yes, it certainly happens ... it would not be the same with a new one - Many thanks Judy, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 3/18/2019 10:48:00 AM Uh oh, I hope you found it again. Best of luck in doing so. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 2:50:00 PM - This is just imagination, M.L. ... it is still on my finger :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/18/2019 7:37:00 AM Hope this is isn't true, very sad, Anne.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 2:47:00 PM - No, I haven't lost my wedding ring Jo :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/18/2019 7:13:00 AM But the memories live on..never lost. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 2:46:00 PM - We have the memories ... it's true, Vijay :) - But, sad to lose a wedding ring ... luckily I have not lost mine :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/18/2019 4:13:00 AM How sad indeed Anne Lise, I've not worn my wedding ring since my fall in April, we tried to get it back on on Valentines Day but its still too uncomfy to wear. I will leave it a year like the physio said but may have to get it re sized ... I guess until then I'm a 'free' woman lol lol:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 2:41:00 PM - Mine is not lost, Jan ... I have it on my finger :) - Sad you can not use yours ... you can have it on a chain around your neck :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/18/2019 3:54:00 AM Sad but so artfully done dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck my friend! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2019 2:36:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)