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04.12.2024
Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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Second Chance For Non Placement Contest
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By virtue of its peculiarities The gaze is at liberty through chains of fragmentary images The eternal light captures the attention At sunset rise, with mystery of increase Truth is mightier than the shroud of sin Without confusion and uncertainty, double-born in eternal love The shadows of the earth in unprofitable strife the silence reflects the sinful song A living beauty all divine twin tears of gratitude filled with the light of heaven

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Date: 12/7/2024 12:53:00 PM
Anne-Lise, this poem stretches my imagination. What is the absolute truth? I'm glad you make it mysterious since it's something different for each of us (IMHO). Some people seem certain of what we've come from, but who knows really? Smiles!
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Date: 12/7/2024 10:31:00 AM
Good one
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Date: 12/5/2024 2:46:00 PM
Lovely write of Gods light to lead the path to good will to all and love also to share with our brothers and sisters.
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Date: 12/5/2024 1:20:00 AM
God sends us light, and it radiates all over us. What a lovely and excellent poem. Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 12/4/2024 11:15:00 PM
We need the light to protect and guide us, Good luck Anne-Lise.. Tom
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Date: 12/4/2024 10:46:00 PM
may be God's lights, beautifully written, enjoyed
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Date: 12/4/2024 8:29:00 PM
Love the meaning behind stanza 2. I do feel strife silence falls on the abandoned earth. Blessings my friend. Soup mail.
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Date: 12/4/2024 6:45:00 PM
Very beautiful...eternal light is my hope as well.
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Date: 12/4/2024 5:51:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem to read this Christmas season! Wonderful writing, Anne-Lise. :) Hugs and blessings.
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