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I love this!:




From one second to the next
Love is our strength and honor, while we are still alive

The body feels cold and stiff
Searching for heart beat ... breathe ... pulse
One, two, three .... one, two, three
Please

With eyes full of tears
One, two, three .... one, two, three
Fearing the silence ... and darkness

Power failure
... I did my best










24.02.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 2/26/2017 1:58:00 AM
Hahaha Anne-Lise, this is so funny, and that picture :D
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Date: 2/26/2017 7:53:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2017 8:24:00 PM
Sunshine, very nice! Love the pic! We need love to survive!
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Date: 2/26/2017 7:52:00 AM
- All we need is LOVE .... - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2017 7:18:00 PM
Seems like forever since we talked... we must fix that!!! Love and big hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 2/25/2017 7:47:00 PM
- Nice to see you .... been a long time, yes :) - Thank you for visiting, Jack - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2017 3:26:00 PM
A beautiful metaphor! All we can do is give our best. "Love is our strength and honor", really love that line. You have a lovely weekend too Anne-Lise. Hugs, Connie The picture is so cute! 7 ; )
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Date: 2/25/2017 7:49:00 PM
- No one can do more ... than their best ... - Thank you for visiting a 7 and your comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2017 1:46:00 PM
I don't know whether to laugh or cry, think I'll laugh... Good one Anne-Lise.
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Date: 2/25/2017 2:40:00 PM
- Maybe both laugh and cry ... it's how you experience this poem, Charlie - But I like your smile - thanks for friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2017 1:28:00 PM
A compelling poem, Anne-Lise. Life and death are separated by the ability to breathe. Sometimes life wins the struggle, but we have to accept the consequences of "Power failure." Food for thought, my friend. Excellent writing!
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Date: 2/25/2017 2:45:00 PM
- .... What happens when power is gone .... it gets dark .... we feel helpless ... some get scared ... but what is it we are afraid ? - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2017 9:22:00 AM
Well, when I think that this poem may refer also to the reality of human existence it becomes a monumental existentialistic poem and for that give it a HUGE SEVEN my dear, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 2/25/2017 2:50:00 PM
- You have like always right, my friend - The fear of the unknown ... - Sharing love while we live on this earth - Always do the best we can - Thank you for visiting a 7 and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 8:34:00 PM
Anne-Lise, without the picture your poem would be sad but with it, it's hilarious! I got a good chuckle out of it. Blessings, Kim
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Date: 2/25/2017 2:58:00 PM
- Our time on earth ... is not for eternity, Kim - Sharing love and care for each other ... do the best we can ... before the power goes out ... and heart stops beating - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 7:26:00 PM
Lovely lines and funny image make me smile, :)
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Date: 2/25/2017 2:53:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Ali :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 7:20:00 PM
I think it's hilarious, Anne Lise. Although, I hate it when my mouse is unresponsive:)
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Date: 2/25/2017 2:53:00 PM
- Daniel, thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 5:13:00 PM
You can hide your humour in your writing but are obviously fun to be around Anna-Lise. Always a help in serious health situations, such as this.
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Date: 2/25/2017 4:33:00 AM
- Both you and me are nurses, Jean ... minute counts !!! - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 4:34:00 PM
...this is cute...for any kind of mouse :-) nice humour Anne-Lise :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 2/25/2017 4:34:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 3:24:00 PM
Very cute, Anne Lise! This made me smile :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:01:00 PM
- A pleasure ... thank you for your smile, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 3:14:00 PM
made me smile Anne Lise the pic is hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:03:00 PM
- Cold and death ... - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 3:04:00 PM
Kind of sad but really funny. if it were just the poem, I would be frowning but because of the picture, I can't help but smile. Really fun Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:09:00 PM
- It was my purpose ... a smile is what I want :) - Death is so sad ... -Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/24/2017 3:03:00 PM
Oh this is hilarious...I love it A-L....a fav
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:11:00 PM
- ....Wooow .... thank you very much, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)