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From one second to the next Love is our strength and honor, while we are still alive The body feels cold and stiff Searching for heart beat ... breathe ... pulse One, two, three .... one, two, three Please With eyes full of tears One, two, three .... one, two, three Fearing the silence ... and darkness Power failure ... I did my best 24.02.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Darren White

Date: 2/26/2017 1:58:00 AM

Hahaha Anne-Lise, this is so funny, and that picture :D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2017 7:53:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/25/2017 8:24:00 PM

Sunshine, very nice! Love the pic! We need love to survive!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2017 7:52:00 AM

- All we need is LOVE .... - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/25/2017 7:18:00 PM

Seems like forever since we talked... we must fix that!!! Love and big hugs, Jack xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 7:47:00 PM

- Nice to see you .... been a long time, yes :) - Thank you for visiting, Jack - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/25/2017 3:26:00 PM

A beautiful metaphor! All we can do is give our best. "Love is our strength and honor", really love that line. You have a lovely weekend too Anne-Lise. Hugs, Connie The picture is so cute! 7 ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 7:49:00 PM

- No one can do more ... than their best ... - Thank you for visiting a 7 and your comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/25/2017 1:46:00 PM

I don't know whether to laugh or cry, think I'll laugh... Good one Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 2:40:00 PM

- Maybe both laugh and cry ... it's how you experience this poem, Charlie - But I like your smile - thanks for friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2017 1:28:00 PM

A compelling poem, Anne-Lise. Life and death are separated by the ability to breathe. Sometimes life wins the struggle, but we have to accept the consequences of "Power failure." Food for thought, my friend. Excellent writing!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 2:45:00 PM

- .... What happens when power is gone .... it gets dark .... we feel helpless ... some get scared ... but what is it we are afraid ? - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/25/2017 9:22:00 AM

Well, when I think that this poem may refer also to the reality of human existence it becomes a monumental existentialistic poem and for that give it a HUGE SEVEN my dear, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 2:50:00 PM

- You have like always right, my friend - The fear of the unknown ... - Sharing love while we live on this earth - Always do the best we can - Thank you for visiting a 7 and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/24/2017 8:34:00 PM

Anne-Lise, without the picture your poem would be sad but with it, it's hilarious! I got a good chuckle out of it. Blessings, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 2:58:00 PM

- Our time on earth ... is not for eternity, Kim - Sharing love and care for each other ... do the best we can ... before the power goes out ... and heart stops beating - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ali Pran

Date: 2/24/2017 7:26:00 PM

Lovely lines and funny image make me smile, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 2:53:00 PM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Ali :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/24/2017 7:20:00 PM

I think it's hilarious, Anne Lise. Although, I hate it when my mouse is unresponsive:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 2:53:00 PM

- Daniel, thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 2/24/2017 5:13:00 PM

You can hide your humour in your writing but are obviously fun to be around Anna-Lise. Always a help in serious health situations, such as this.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 4:33:00 AM

- Both you and me are nurses, Jean ... minute counts !!! - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/24/2017 4:34:00 PM

...this is cute...for any kind of mouse :-) nice humour Anne-Lise :-) blessings, lynn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2017 4:34:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/24/2017 3:24:00 PM

Very cute, Anne Lise! This made me smile :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2017 4:01:00 PM

- A pleasure ... thank you for your smile, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/24/2017 3:14:00 PM

made me smile Anne Lise the pic is hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2017 4:03:00 PM

- Cold and death ... - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 2/24/2017 3:04:00 PM

Kind of sad but really funny. if it were just the poem, I would be frowning but because of the picture, I can't help but smile. Really fun Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2017 3:09:00 PM

- It was my purpose ... a smile is what I want :) - Death is so sad ... -Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/24/2017 3:03:00 PM

Oh this is hilarious...I love it A-L....a fav

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2017 3:11:00 PM

- ....Wooow .... thank you very much, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)