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The waves of the wake will shower when daughters of the sea, shall arise they meet the storm with important delivery - the mermaid's egg This birth is unique The mermaids daughters of the Millennium Soft under white foam and seaweed among the many occurrences of the place In melted silver and sparkling moon dust - a safe universe for the newborn A journey in waves, that comes and goes, like the ebb and flow As the sea lifts a grain of sand, we salute Love that gives new life La luna asoma * - in the cradle of the sea 06.08.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Devotion to Ocean Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke * "La luna asoma" - When the Moon Rises 2nd place in the contest

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Date: 9/14/2019 8:12:00 PM
This wonderful poem was such a joy to read Anne-Lise ... Congratulations on your win as well!
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Date: 9/15/2019 6:08:00 AM
- Thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/16/2019 6:25:00 PM
Ah...a lovely poem and wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/19/2019 1:59:00 PM
- Thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/16/2019 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Anne Lise for this beauty and the bella (Italian for beautiful) picture that accompanies it! I'm Honored to share 2d Place with you. Thanks for your kind comment re my win - Bob
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Date: 8/19/2019 1:58:00 PM
- Ditto Bob, thanks for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/16/2019 4:42:00 AM
A lovely poem Anne-Lise, congrats.
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Date: 8/16/2019 7:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/16/2019 3:54:00 AM
A mythical, magical story of midwifery among mermaids. I LOVE it Anna- Lise. Well done on your placement.
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Date: 8/16/2019 7:41:00 AM
- Many thanks, Jean ... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/15/2019 9:58:00 PM
Wonderful write, Sunshine, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Date: 8/16/2019 7:40:00 AM
- Many thanks Eve, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/15/2019 8:43:00 PM
There is an ocean of romance in this lovely write
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Date: 8/16/2019 7:39:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/15/2019 4:20:00 PM
This is lovely Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving podium win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/16/2019 7:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2019 1:20:00 PM
A beautiful verse, Sunshine, and it is certain to be a top winner! Thank you so much for your kind comments re my entry in the contest. Always the best to you - Bob
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Date: 8/10/2019 12:20:00 PM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Bob :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2019 1:36:00 AM
Splendid poem dear Anne-Lise ! Reading it and flying, superb ! congrats salute alkas
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Date: 8/10/2019 12:19:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2019 8:38:00 PM
Well crafted dear Anne-Lise...an instant FAV!...best of luck for the contest...although ready for a win...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 8/10/2019 12:18:00 PM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much :) - And a special thank you for the fave, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2019 11:38:00 AM
Stunning poetry dear soul sister - imagery dancing on every line - well penned. Hugs. Jennifer.
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:38:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2019 2:30:00 PM
your words are as magical as the mermaids of the sea...it flows beautifully, great penning Anne-Lise :) hugs
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Date: 8/8/2019 12:13:00 PM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Sandra :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2019 11:01:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise: A beautiful poetic description of the ocean!
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Date: 8/7/2019 1:45:00 PM
- Thank you, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2019 10:52:00 AM
A beautiful write! The image alongside your poem is divine. La luna asoma - the cradle of the sea, calls to us all!
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Date: 8/7/2019 1:45:00 PM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2019 9:46:00 AM
This washed over me with tides of beauty.
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Date: 8/7/2019 1:44:00 PM
- Thank you, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/6/2019 7:53:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Anne-Lise! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/7/2019 5:16:00 AM
- A little fairytale from the sea, Kim :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/6/2019 4:55:00 PM
"Sparkling moon" poetry that fills the heart with magical beauty dearest, Anne-Lise! What an ethereal verse my friend! Good luck! Hugs xxx
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Date: 8/7/2019 5:14:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/6/2019 4:48:00 PM
This is absolutely delightful imagery Anne-Lise I am so behind at the moment not had time to see the contests:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2019 5:13:00 AM
- ... many contest Jan, I can not manage to write for all :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/6/2019 2:09:00 PM
A charming poem Anne-Lise..kudos for the imagination and creativity..all the best.
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Date: 8/7/2019 5:11:00 AM
- Many thanks, Vijay ... a pleasure to share :) ... fun to write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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