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                 She has breast cancer, malignant tumor
                 Time passes, a waiting game
                 Routine mammography


                       A filter of frustration and sadness
                       Death can not be overcome
                       Grief is the price of love


                 The moment of freedom, the mask falls off
                 Show yourself as a true friend
                 "We'll do this together"
















12-07-2018
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Date: 8/12/2018 2:30:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, a beautiful Kimo, encompassing your thought with such emotional words. Your last line does sing in its power. This Kimo does touch the heart my friend. As always, your words sing a truth. Have a wonderful end to your weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:38:00 AM
- Many thanks Mike, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2018 8:40:00 AM
A touching poem.
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:37:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/1/2018 7:27:00 PM
Anne-Lise, this poem speaks to me in many ways. Having seen people close with cancer, not just breast, but other..it is an emotional thing. Deff having a support system helps. Lovely piece as always . Your friend, Jess
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:37:00 AM
- Jessica, many thanks for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/1/2018 4:27:00 PM
A mixture of emotions in this string of Kimo, Anne-Lise. Cancer used to be a 'whispered' about topic; now it is important to bring awareness; caught in time can be life-saving. "We'll do this together" is the support that instills hope and strength. Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:36:00 AM
- Many thanks Paul, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/31/2018 4:38:00 PM
This is a really sad and beautiful poem, we all have to die one day, death is inevitable but I do hope that when that time comes, it comes like a friend rather than enemy, if it pains, the pain should only be of seconds or minute, but cancer, O God, it kills you everyday, you know you are going to die, especially when it comes to chemo,you just wait there for death to come and bear the pain, your last stanza was really beautiful I see that it is for a contest, so I wish you best of luck in it,
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:36:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/17/2018 9:47:00 PM
Each kimo is exquisite in its poignancy, Anne-Lise. Meaningful,moving and beautifully expressed.. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 7/18/2018 3:47:00 AM
- Susan, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/17/2018 10:17:00 AM
A very poignant and meaningful poem. Very well done. Anne-Lise. A big hug coming your way //Warren :)
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Date: 7/17/2018 11:46:00 AM
- Thanks for the big hugs and your visit, always nice to see you Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2018 5:32:00 PM
the last part is so beautiful, Sunshine.
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:34:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2018 4:16:00 PM
Support is so important.
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:34:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2018 3:15:00 PM
Such a beautiful, uplifting poem, Anne-Lise. Ty for sharing this ink gemstone. Love and more love always.
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2018 9:49:00 PM
A woman's biggest fear. Than to have what makes you a woman remove so heartbreaking. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/16/2018 12:34:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2018 8:25:00 PM
"Grief is the price of love"...so sad and true...friendship so helpful :) Unfortunate that cancer is one of the "defects" of our "advancement" on this planet.
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Date: 7/16/2018 12:33:00 AM
- Thank you so much Chris, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2018 7:37:00 PM
Great message in your poem. I have a friend who was just diagnosed with breast cancer; support is so important.
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Date: 7/16/2018 12:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2018 1:56:00 PM
Sad work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. I know that it must be hard on a family going through the tough times fighting cancer. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/15/2018 1:58:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2018 3:59:00 PM
A well written engrossing poem filled with sadness, dealing with questions of love, friendship, death and courage in a whirl wind of emotions. Emile.
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Date: 7/15/2018 8:48:00 AM
- Thank you so much Emile, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2018 4:12:00 PM
with faith and support, the world will see this ailment through, anne... remarkable write!..huggs
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Date: 7/14/2018 1:51:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2018 3:16:00 PM
Yes let us all join the Fight, Anne-Lise, love your kimo's
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Date: 7/14/2018 1:51:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2018 2:37:00 PM
This is such a very touching poem! :)
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Date: 7/13/2018 2:45:00 PM
- Thank you so much Arthur, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2018 1:26:00 PM
so many words of wisdom and love in these three small poems. "we'll do this together" - some of the kindest words ever. True friendship.
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Date: 7/13/2018 1:57:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and comment, Becca :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2018 12:10:00 PM
Only love can see it through...it will be hard for both of you...True friends till the end...Nice one Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/13/2018 12:19:00 PM
- When the disease hits, it is a matter of course and deeply meaningful standing close together with your friend on her difficult journey, Arturo :) - Thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2018 9:57:00 AM
Bravery personified, wonderful write Anne-Lise...
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Date: 7/13/2018 11:47:00 AM
- Thank you so much Charlie, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2018 2:49:00 AM
Powerful and truthful writing that steers the emotions revealing thus tragic reality. Excellency written my dear friend, Anne - Lise. You know best of the subject. Good luck!
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:21:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2018 6:31:00 PM
Wonderful write Anne Lise. It's so important to have the love and support of friends and family when you are ill with a life threatening disease. ATTITUDE is very important in being able to beat cancer. Those with a positive attitude usually fare better than those who are frightened. Wonderful work here. Bravo. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:20:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2018 4:16:00 PM
Well written Sunshine, showing support and being with them every step of the way shows real love and support. Good luck Tom
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:20:00 AM
- Many thanks, Tom :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2018 3:18:00 PM
Cancer is tough. It has affected the lives of everyone. This poem shows your beautiful heart, Anne Lise:)
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:19:00 AM
- Many thanks, Daniel :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)