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Mahkota, Frost, Pohon, Musim Dingin

A freezing cold evening Where the stars shining bright With frost blade flanks From mouth and nose steam In the clear silence White untrodden snows Nature's frozen pulse Sleep like a little baby One gracious moon After the night the light is shattered into gold At sunrise raise your heartbeat 03.01.2016 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/3/2016 3:32:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, January is a dream of a write. It can touch the Soul with such Crystalline delight. Your soft words paint such a wonderful picture Anne-Lise, one can easily see your winter painting. January comes and a new year begins. Your words sing, may they always sing Anne-Thus us a canvas i would ever like to see....Vladislav.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2016 4:48:00 AM

- Vladislav, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/12/2016 1:55:00 PM

The picture looks like us these past few weeks. Looks so pretty when the trees are decorated with frost. Lovely poem. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2016 2:01:00 PM

- Pretty but cold, dear friend :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/9/2016 10:37:00 PM

Bonjour, guten tag! J'aime pas du tout la neige. Ich hasse das schnee! But your description is beautiful. Hallo! Håper du er godt og nyter det nye året. Takk for at du leser min dikt. / M

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2016 5:20:00 AM

- Thanks, Maurice :) ..... mange takk ..... jeg takker deg .... tusen takk ..... takk fra mitt hjerte :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/8/2016 9:54:00 PM

Hello Anne Lise ... as it is quite warm here I can only shiver at the thought of how cold it must be, reading your picture poem Anne Lise - Lindsay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/9/2016 6:08:00 AM

- Lindsay, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/8/2016 6:18:00 AM

That line when your mouth and nose steam, oh what a vision. Nice poem Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/8/2016 6:25:00 AM

- .... and tears in my eyes because of the cold and biting wind ...... brrrrrrr ....... - Thanks, Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 1/6/2016 6:02:00 PM

Beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2016 2:23:00 AM

- Thanks, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Martin

Date: 1/6/2016 4:21:00 PM

Enjoyed so much. Wonderful imagery!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2016 2:23:00 AM

- Thomas, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2016 3:03:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..It is very descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2016 2:22:00 AM

- Sara, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/5/2016 11:24:00 PM

Hi Anne- Lise!Very beautifully painted picture of January here my dear friend. Excellent winter poem!A7! Sending you love and prayers.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/6/2016 4:32:00 AM

- Thank you, Dorian :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/5/2016 11:42:00 AM

may the first days of new year bless you more, anne.. huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 11:52:00 AM

- Thanks, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/5/2016 10:00:00 AM

Thank you for encouraging..hugs to you too and a Happy New Year...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 11:26:00 AM

- Joanna, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/5/2016 7:29:00 AM

I'm sure that where you live, at this time of year time must seen to stop and hang, still.... A lovely write, Anne Lise. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 8:21:00 AM

- It's cold on the toes and the nose, Viv :)) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/5/2016 4:50:00 AM

This poem is simply beautiful Anne Lise. Your imagery is divine! #7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 5:05:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/5/2016 3:20:00 AM

Anne Lise, delightful imageries.!~ hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 3:40:00 AM

- Olive, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/4/2016 6:27:00 PM

What a beautiful little poem Anne Lise, what I wouldn't do for just a little taste of you weather right now, I really loved this little verse, hope you are well and happy new year, take care.........Vera

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 3:40:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/4/2016 5:54:00 PM

A longing look at a moment of reflection as one encompasses the grandeur of nature and our place within it. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 3:39:00 AM

- Emile, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/4/2016 4:53:00 PM

What A delicious description of the year's first month! 'the light is shattered into gold,' what a lovely phrase! BRAVO Anne. Besr wishes, Keith

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 3:39:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/4/2016 2:53:00 PM

Wow! Beautiful of nature depicts within your write. Excellent piece. I love reading nature's poem.........A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2016 3:39:00 AM

- Afolabi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/4/2016 11:38:00 AM

Beautiful picture with beautiful words crafted a nice poem. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2016 12:01:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Sage

Date: 1/4/2016 11:04:00 AM

Nice write Anne...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2016 12:02:00 PM

- Thanks W.S. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/4/2016 7:05:00 AM

Your poem makes spring jealous of January, dear Anee-Lise! Beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2016 7:22:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/3/2016 7:28:00 PM

Beautiful poem with beautiful words , great choice for the words you've pictured a lovely image in my head , beautiful description of the month....hugs / / :) dalia

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2016 7:26:00 AM

- Dalia, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2016 5:33:00 PM

Lovely poem on this month of January! I rarely find such nice things to say about this month!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2016 7:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/3/2016 4:56:00 PM

Loved the "nature's frozen pulse". Recently, I've read an autobiography where the author visited your country, Anne. His description of its unique beauty made me think of you and your poetry. So lovely... hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2016 7:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/3/2016 1:18:00 PM

Your January imagery is beautiful, Anne Lise! ... and I can hear that heartbeat:) You have snow...we are still enjoying sunshine and nice weather! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/3/2016 1:32:00 PM

- Lucky you are ............ here is freezing - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)