- In the Fragility of Dreams -

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A brighter tomorrow - in infinite tenderness
fragrance of your free wings
When the sky is transparent
... a perfect day indeed
Freshly sprouted - like flower in bud

Where stars glide by at night
in blue moonlight
... the light turns through your dream

The soft peace with less hand luggage
Find a four-heart clover
under the white lilac

A magical sparkling cobweb
with small glass beads
... like a good night kiss on your cheek
- an hour to fall in love

-  one's little dreams ...
is to forget the reality ...
just for a while ...
- don't crush them ... please






18.05.2020
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In the fragility of dreams Poetry Contest
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Date: 6/2/2020 9:31:00 PM
Yes nice to forget reality for a little while. Well written. love phyl
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Date: 5/30/2020 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. I love your ending, "one's little dreams ...is to forget the reality ...just for a while ...- don't crush them ... please" Yes, dreams can do that. Enjoy your win and day..........
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Date: 5/28/2020 9:27:00 PM
Very lovely imagery, very lyrical--a 1st in my book!
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Date: 5/28/2020 8:24:00 AM
Such a lovely, inspirational, WINNING poem, Anne-Lise! Janice
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Date: 5/27/2020 3:42:00 PM
Congrats Anne-Lis, a lovely poem. :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 3:02:00 PM
Back with congrats on your podium win--so well deserved, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:28:00 PM
Your words sparkle with the light of hour emotions. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 8:04:00 AM
Back with Congrats on your win Anne...hugs
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Date: 5/27/2020 5:48:00 AM
such beautiful imagery and yes dreams are a chance to forget oneself.... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/26/2020 12:51:00 PM
Beautifully penned Anne, hugs
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Date: 5/25/2020 10:26:00 AM
This is so nice. Very peaceful. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 5/22/2020 8:52:00 PM
These are beautiful dreams weaved (wasn't that a song?) LOVE the ending...xx Rhonda
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Date: 5/22/2020 2:03:00 PM
anne!... so nice to relish your wonderful poems like this one--amazing!...hope you are okay...huggs
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Date: 5/21/2020 7:09:00 PM
Simply beautiful words my friend. My mind seems distracted lately and your words are a gem. love phyl
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Date: 5/21/2020 12:14:00 PM
When they are s beautifully expressed, they will never be crushed ...
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Date: 5/21/2020 11:23:00 AM
Beautiful Anne-Lise. The dreaminess in this piece is tangible. Love the pic. God Bless and stay well. JB
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Date: 5/21/2020 10:03:00 AM
This is beautiful and I so love it. God bless you, sweet friend and may you always have dreams come true. Love to you, Gina
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Date: 5/21/2020 2:22:00 AM
'Don't crust them, trust them, Love your fragile dreams, Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:50:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Anne-Lise! Very sensual in it's read. Good Luck with the dreams xxoo
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:37:00 AM
We must read more poems like your my friend, relaxing serene, simply beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/19/2020 6:50:00 AM
- Many thanks sister Jenny, for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/18/2020 3:13:00 PM
this is lovely, anne-lise! we all need to "forget the reality" at this time...
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Date: 5/19/2020 6:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/18/2020 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful imagery of sweet dreams, Anne-Lise..all the best.
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Date: 5/19/2020 6:48:00 AM
- Many thanks ... always a pleasure to see you, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/18/2020 2:51:00 PM
You have written a splendid poem, miraculous for these times. Sending you love prayers my dear soul sister xo
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Date: 5/19/2020 6:47:00 AM
- Thank you so much Pixie, for your comments and prayers :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/18/2020 12:37:00 PM
I'll be careful not to crush them..."The soft peace with less hand luggage" All the best Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/18/2020 2:11:00 PM
- Many thanks, Arturo ... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/18/2020 12:19:00 PM
such a dreamy, lovely piece, anne..nice to connect with you again...huggs
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:58:00 PM
- Many thanks ... always a pleasure to see you, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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