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11.12.2024

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- Sanford-style tanka - 
- A PICTURE PROMPT -
 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Suzette Richards

2nd place in the contest

- Impulse Rain -

                                     
                                               impulse rain
                                            magical thinking
                                             a perspective
                                           fragile and porous
                                         fundamental elements

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Paul Callus Date: 1/8/2025 3:03:00 PM An unexpected rainfall can provide a pleasant surprise, Anne-Lise. Such is your winning "impulsive rain"!! Congratulations & Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Jim Healey Date: 1/8/2025 7:39:00 AM Well done, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your winning placement. Cheers from Canada. Jim Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 12/17/2024 7:45:00 AM Anne-Lise, you make a magical connection between a brief shower and how we might think of our world around us. Moments like ideas can be fleeting and almost escape your consciousness. Your poetry exists on a deep level! Smiles and thanks!!! Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 12/15/2024 11:48:00 AM Beautiful, Dear Anne-Lise! Enjoyed your take on the picture! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/13/2024 5:21:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, your write my dear friend creative and enjoyable as always. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/13/2024 6:15:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs

Ink Empress Date: 12/13/2024 1:50:00 AM This is beautiful how your words flow so well in this dear anne lise, so well written and expressed for the picture prompt, best wishes, sending you light always Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/13/2024 6:15:00 AM - Thank you very much, Ink :) - hugs

Deb M Date: 12/12/2024 3:13:00 AM I just adore rain and this delightful poem Sunshine! Debx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/12/2024 7:24:00 AM - Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/11/2024 12:55:00 PM I am not sure how to do the challenge, but I bet you got it! Indeed, as Jay says, your poem fits the essence of the picture. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/12/2024 7:23:00 AM -... actually I haven't, Andrea :) - hugs

John Read Date: 12/11/2024 10:43:00 AM Your poem fits the picture perfectly Anne sure to do well in the contest. xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/11/2024 11:16:00 AM - Thank you very much, John :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/11/2024 10:24:00 AM Much as we dislike it we could not survive without it. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/11/2024 10:29:00 AM - I need your good luck for this contest, Tom... never heard of: Sanford-style tanka... thanks :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 12/11/2024 10:14:00 AM Nice Tanka. Fits the essence of the picture. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/11/2024 10:18:00 AM - I prefer the "regular tanka -5-7-5-7-7-" ... thanks, Jay :) - hugs