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- I Tried To Say -







                                   On a cloud I wrote - I love you
                                       But the cloud blew away
                                    On a tree I wrote - I love you
                                  But someone cut down the tree
                          In the sand on the beach I wrote - I love you
                                 But the waves wiped them away
                                 In the wind, I cried - I love you
                      But the wind was too strong and no one could hear
                               In a small letter I wrote - I love you
                             But I never posted it - it was never sent
                                      But you know - I love you
                                    and my heart belongs to you




19.02.2013
A-L Andresen :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/27/2018 1:39:00 AM
Wonderful lines. I wish I had written one like this forty five years ago. Thanks for sharing the poem.
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Date: 10/20/2017 4:56:00 PM
Very nice Poem, I really liked it. Nice theme and awesomely written. Thank you.
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Don :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2017 8:24:00 AM
I love this poem. Beautiful words. ??
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:49:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Tammy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2017 10:11:00 PM
I read it 5 times and still I want to read it again, it is great!!
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:49:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Dino :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2017 7:40:00 AM
Love this poem.
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:51:00 AM
- Karen, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/29/2017 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful. "I Tried To Say" I love you, BUT. Profound!
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:09:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/19/2017 6:00:00 AM
Hey Wow!!!! Fantabulous burst of Love in comical way.
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:08:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Matilda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 7:54:00 PM
I really like this poem, Sunny Girl. Lovely imagery.
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:23:00 AM
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Date: 7/21/2016 5:59:00 PM
Hello Sunshine! I really like your poem, "I Tried to Say", which depicts such a human emotion. And, thank you for your welcoming comment on my poem also. Carole
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:44:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Carole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2016 10:22:00 AM
Lovely write mate
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:42:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Opeyemi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2015 8:57:00 AM
First of all, this is catchy as well as breath-taking. I could imagine doing every line. It also reminds me of life these days, it is like I'm writing "on a cloud, in the sand or on the wind". I "post" to Life, but others... Thank you for visiting my poetry site today. Rainbow.
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Date: 9/9/2015 11:07:00 AM
- Rainbow, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2015 4:08:00 AM
I love this! especially when you said "I never posted it- it was never sent"
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Date: 5/29/2015 4:17:00 AM
- Everyone has a letter they did not send ..... I guess :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Sandy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 7:58:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, I have to say that this is one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry I have seen on soup. The simplicity and elegance of the phrasing is breathtaking. "On a cloud I wrote - I love you But the cloud blew away". Hunting words. into favs and a 7 love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:44:00 AM
- How nice that you read my "older" poem - And what great comments, a 7 and fav! - Thank you my new friend Shane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 9:07:00 AM
I love this ! Beautiful and reminds me of a couple I saw on the beach the other day writing I Love You in the sand.
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Date: 4/14/2014 12:01:00 PM
... so sweet couple :) - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Cindy.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/30/2013 9:20:00 AM
Excellent. Soft, gentle, easy. We all can relate.
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Date: 11/30/2013 9:53:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Joey.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/5/2013 5:45:00 PM
Well I'm looking for one of yours I haven' read " older ones" have a great day Anne- Lise ;} <3
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Date: 8/6/2013 1:50:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Debbie.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2013 4:31:00 AM
Awww beautiful, makes me believe in love again.
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Date: 7/15/2013 4:35:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mafata. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2013 12:59:00 PM
Powerful and beautiful words. Really lovely
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Date: 7/8/2013 1:01:00 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Terry-Ann. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2013 12:23:00 PM
I love that, I feel that way a lot, with what ever I say, no matter what I do people don't hear me, not unless I put it in a poem, them everyone seems to want to help
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Date: 4/16/2013 12:27:00 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2013 2:02:00 AM
Oh, this is awesome Anne ;} going to fav's xo's to you ;}
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Date: 4/2/2013 2:59:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2013 9:48:00 AM
Beautiful sweet poetry here, WHO needs a big gesture to tell them What they know is true. Keep writing
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Date: 3/26/2013 10:57:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Joanna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2013 4:08:00 AM
Time honoured theme, but so originally and candidly delivered. Delightful :)
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Date: 3/24/2013 4:17:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Maggie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/9/2013 11:38:00 AM
Love the honesty and simplicity in this one... sometimes it's hard to say what we really feel inside but the ones that really matter to you will feel the love regardless... those moments of silence can say a lot!
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Date: 3/9/2013 11:52:00 AM
Yes, it's true. - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2013 10:59:00 AM
Due to lack of communication, message may not be sent but reality is reality, never dies. Wonderfully done. Thanks always, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/6/2013 2:29:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/25/2013 2:22:00 PM
Beautifully written poem! Your friend.
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Date: 2/25/2013 2:23:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Carol. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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