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I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel. ~Maya Angelou

Everything in my past, has shaped me into who I am today Daughter I'm fine Thinking on all the years we had which you today opt out of Actions, decisions and choices My world is hushed and silent No laughter from grandchildren every soft embrace is faded A million words would not brings you back, none of your puzzle pieces fit together There is pain on both sides Daughter I hope you are fine I cannot live with drama and lies We often want to avoid unpleasant feelings and lose touch with who we are But you must be ready and emotionally available Our emotions are a compass indicative when we makes choices Nothing is impossible you are a part of my heart 16.11.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved It's a part of me /Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 1st place in the contest

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Date: 12/4/2020 10:11:00 AM
Such a lovely, yet sad write. Always nice to see your work. Best wishes my dear friend. Jess
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Date: 12/7/2020 3:34:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jessica :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/29/2020 9:43:00 AM
A bleated Congrats on your win--had a little computer snafu.
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Date: 11/29/2020 12:14:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2020 11:45:00 AM
So sad a commentary between mother and daughter. Poignant really. If she could hear your words and the feelings that they tell, maybe she would have empathy. Best hopes and wishes to you in the future.
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:52:00 AM
- I do not need empathy or sympathy ... I need honesty and love :) - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2020 6:34:00 AM
Anne-Lise, beautiful and emotional, and congrats on your win in Silent's contest _Constance
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Date: 11/18/2020 12:01:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 8:33:00 PM
The last two lines are close to my heart too :) Congrats on your top win Anne-Lise // hugs :):)
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Date: 11/18/2020 12:00:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 6:46:00 PM
So well said “ Nothing is impossible~ you are a part of my heart” congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/18/2020 12:00:00 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 4:15:00 PM
That’s a sad heartfelt write Anne-Lise. Although from the nest children have flown, they’ll always find their way back home, and home is where the heart is. Congratulations on your win... Hugs, Belle :-)
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:59:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 4:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest, Sunshine. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:58:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your 1st Place Win, for your well-deserving poem!!
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:57:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations dear Anne-Lise for your heartbreaking poem my friend. Sending hugs and love from Ann xx
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:57:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 10:13:00 AM
Congrats, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:56:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 9:49:00 AM
A very very emotive piece, even though your daughter is not with you physically, she is still a part of your heart.. Brilliant last line... Touching poem, my friend.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:56:00 AM
- Many thanks for my 1st place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 9:48:00 AM
Your beautiful poem tells us you still love your daughter. I hope somehow you find your way back to each other. Life is too short. As you say, we must be "emotionally available" and follow that internal compass. Thank you for sharing that part of yourself, Sunshine! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:54:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 6:46:00 AM
Am so moved Anne. Whatever it is, God is there and prayers give us peace. Stay blessed and best wishes for the contest dear friend.. Love and hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:54:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 6:29:00 AM
Sad and so impressive with feelings. I enjoyed it and wish you only the best for the daughter and contest. God bless you
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:54:00 AM
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Date: 11/17/2020 3:56:00 AM
Sad one. I don't know if based on truth or if on another's truth or just life seeing how things happen in the world. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:53:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2020 12:51:00 AM
I am truly sorry when there is family feuds that seem never to heal. But persist. All can be fixed. ~~
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Date: 11/18/2020 11:53:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2020 11:07:00 PM
I hope that one day you can be reunited, there is nothing broken that cannot be fixed. Tom
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Date: 11/17/2020 8:24:00 AM
- I need the world's strongest glue, Tom :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2020 2:25:00 PM
Powerful message in the quote you posted--and in your heartfelt words, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 11/17/2020 8:22:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2020 2:23:00 PM
This is so moving.... well thought of
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Date: 11/17/2020 8:21:00 AM
- Thank you very much, glad you liked it Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2020 12:16:00 PM
Well expressed Anne-Lise. I hope all is well :)
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Date: 11/17/2020 8:20:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Heidi ... I'm fine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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