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If you believe This poem is about, a black and white COW in the shower ... You are wrong It's about ; MONKEYS Monkeys in cages Four times four meters both in width and height A sad life They are bored Shouting and screaming all day One big mouth with powerful canines Scratching their buttocks and licking toes Within this monkey cage they get sick They feel insecure and need control Creating their own rules, it's about power The result of the actions is called : Psychological deviants Hominoidea, called human monkeys ... I hope the cow enjoys the shower 22.08.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Poem of the Week 27.08.2017 -

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Date: 9/5/2017 7:26:00 AM
Very interesting Sunny, the title hooked me and that last line tied me up in a knot. Brilliant.
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Date: 9/1/2017 7:22:00 AM
..could this be that box they have been telling me to think outside of.....Anne-Lise, tis my belief that any poem that makes the reader squint their eyes, chuckle, and walk away saying hmmmm has done its job. congrats on POTW...
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Date: 9/1/2017 7:33:00 AM
- It's about "bullies" ... people and animals have many similarities ... they are bored ... and just make trouble ... have nothing else to do, John - Thank you for your congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/31/2017 6:24:00 AM
A light hearted start to what is really a serious comment on confinement. But why should we be surprised that we imprison our nearest relatives, when we do it to our own brothers. Love the way you bring the light hearted back to finish, regards to you, Kevin xx
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Date: 8/31/2017 7:58:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2017 1:29:00 PM
Excellent write Anne-Lise, very witty; the ego abounds, this oddly reminds of Plato's cave. A big congrats on POTW:-)
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Date: 8/29/2017 2:35:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Keith :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2017 8:40:00 AM
Just dropping b y once more to leave my congratulations for POTW. A much deserved accolade Anne-Lise. If one could add this poem as a fave again, i would. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/28/2017 1:07:00 PM
- You are always welcome, my friend :) - Thank you for your congratulations, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 5:38:00 PM
An interesting humor and many congrats on POTW my dear friend Anne- Lise... hugs :)
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Date: 8/28/2017 4:07:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 4:47:00 PM
I am back to say congrats on POTW, so very well deserved! :) Hugs
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Date: 8/28/2017 4:07:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 1:11:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on POTW!! Very Well-Done!! A very interesting lead-in from the "COW" in the shower, to "MONKEYS" in cages. This verse made me think too of the crazy nature of human society too. Superb write and A FAV!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 8/27/2017 2:18:00 PM
- Hi Gary :) - I feel like; Edvard Munch ... when he painted the famous paintings "SCREAM" :))) - Many thanks for your congratulations and your fave - hugs and smile // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 7:31:00 AM
Many congrats on your POTW i hope this one is here to stay Anne Lise!!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2017 7:37:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Jan :) - ... ... FOREVER AND ALWAYS :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 5:52:00 AM
from potd to potw...so wonderful to see one of your humorous writes here!! The monkey cage will be filled with screams. ;-)
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:48:00 AM
It was a pleasure to give you the news.
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:47:00 AM
:)))) .......... P.O.T.W. :)))) !!!! - Many thanks, Lin :))))
Date: 8/23/2017 11:55:00 AM
I feel really silly right now because I don't get it :( I don't mean that in a rude way, I really don't understand the joke, and it seems like others do! Can you explain it to me? Thanks Anne Lise and I hope you are doing well. Hugs
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Date: 8/23/2017 12:28:00 PM
- I do not expect everyone to understand this poem ... and that does not mean so much, Becca - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/23/2017 10:59:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, your poetry is always so uplifting, beautiful, and you always brings me smiles, however not only are you a great poet, but you have such a beautiful heart. You keep writing and making people smile, and just ignore the negative few. Hugs!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/23/2017 12:35:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Arthur :) - I have three dogs ... and many poop bags :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 9:02:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent write from your pen. A serious topic looked at as only you can. The screaming monkeys shall always scream for they are insecure. They can scream on deaf ears. It's me in the shower. Seriously though, a well written poem. May your pen ever run gold. Keep writing your gold and spreading your sunshine. You are a special lady. Going to add this one to my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/23/2017 5:27:00 AM
and don't let a horse's arse keep you from writing either. ;-)
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit, fave and your comment, Mike :) - No cow, monkey, or horse can stop my ink :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 1:50:00 PM
LOL Anne-Lise, loved this.
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:09:00 AM
- Arthur, many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 12:35:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , deep write , the laughing cow in the shower , monkey mind bending time ::))))hugs
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 10:46:00 AM
This is a serious topic Anna-Lise but somehow I can't stop giggling. I even mis-read your title as "Homie No Idea". I have a hard time with cages too. Thanks, Dean
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:07:00 AM
- "Homie No Idea" really a great title ... it's just as good, Dean :))) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 7:33:00 AM
Hominoidea have evolved into the monkeys we see today, its always important to evolve both in our minds and our hearts.. anyway, that was a bit of a tangent.. You are right, wild animals only scream when they are insecure.. Or hungry some times..
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:02:00 AM
- Give them some bananas :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 6:46:00 AM
If you believe my comment is pooh-poohing a cow, a monkey, or a psychological deviant you are wrong. My comment is acknowledging the ingenuity of your write, Anne-Lise. ;-)
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Date: 8/23/2017 2:59:00 AM
- Although it smells pooh ... this is freshly washed, Lin :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 6:44:00 AM
Fortunately you have the power of the pen to inform about the monkeys. May the shower wash away their spots.
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Date: 8/23/2017 2:57:00 AM
- We can learn monkeys to write (friendly), but not those who are in a cage - Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 7:07:00 AM
I'm not sure they can be washed away, Tim...only camouflaged.
Date: 8/22/2017 6:26:00 AM
Yes, the cow is really getting into that shower, he loves it I believe! But the main point of your write is ever present...the power we human expel can be devastating to not only other animals but to people as well! Such a dominate poem Anne-Lise, I loved the subtle humor as well, it made the piece more fun to read! Thank you for this elaborate poem, Great work my friend!!
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Date: 8/23/2017 2:54:00 AM
- The cow is lovely and likes to stay clean, Russell :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 6:20:00 AM
Good one...After all is said and done...The cow looks like he's enjoying the shower... I enjoyed it....Have a nice day
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Date: 8/23/2017 2:50:00 AM
- Jepp, "all is said and done" :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 6:14:00 AM
A special poem Anne-Lise--a deep thought expressed with a bit of humor!
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Date: 8/23/2017 2:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 5:38:00 AM
Bravo Anne Lis!e I am adding this to my faves it sure packs a powerful punch:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2017 2:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit, fave and your comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/22/2017 5:28:00 AM
Unfortunately a lot of small minded people get so carried away by their' so called power.' I like your analogy here a thing which is comparable to something else in significant respects.A great write as usual Anne-Lise....Maria xxx
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Date: 8/23/2017 2:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and your comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)