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- Heaven's Contrasts -

- Sunrise 

Nature's artwork painted with authentic brushes
the palette hanging on a nail at the door
The painted areas melt completely with the paper,
and become one with it
Purple: a color of prestige, nobility and majesty
A little simplified you can say
By opening yourself for the image
you get an opportunity to get in touch
with a different dimension

... and Sunset
 
Everything from heaven and paradise to love, sunset and ocean dunes
The hour from day to night creates a very special atmosphere
Some find it melancholy at the fall of the sun
The beautiful light fades away the day, a bitter taste
Over a carafe of sangria, enjoy the silence
The longing for love, with eyes closed everything is easy
Tomorrow, tomorrow a whole new day
Beautiful is God's heaven, a gleaming link which is held by angels












14.02.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Sunrise and sunset contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

- 1st place in the contest -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/9/2018 2:33:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your win, Sunshine.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:45:00 PM
- Many thanks, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2018 3:27:00 AM
Very meaningfully penned...
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Date: 3/20/2018 3:57:00 AM
- Many thanks, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/21/2018 2:51:00 PM
Beautiful and so heartwarming. I love how you write and best of all, your works make me feel something. That is the magic of good poetry..eh? :) Big Hugs, Jon
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Date: 2/22/2018 3:31:00 AM
- Sounds like I've done my job with this writing ... meaning to feel is a good poem, Jon :) - Thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/20/2018 10:18:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:22:00 AM
- Many thanks, Anna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/19/2018 2:11:00 PM
This is a lovely poem and congrats on your win. Colorful skies part of God's creation. love phyl
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:13:00 PM
- Phyllis, many thanks for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/19/2018 8:11:00 AM
Well done, I like you thought of melancholy sunsets conveying the end of someone/something. Congrats, Sunshine, on your first place win; I also enjoyed your two left boots senryu this AM.
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Date: 2/19/2018 8:31:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/19/2018 7:05:00 AM
Congrats Anne-Lise on your first place win!
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Date: 2/19/2018 8:30:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/19/2018 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your great win.
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Date: 2/19/2018 3:23:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win for the lovely poem, Sunshine ...
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:58:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 7:19:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Anne-Lise on your wonderful first place win with your beautifully expressed, lustrous twin poems.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:57:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 7:16:00 PM
a very well deserved placement, dear. congratulations.
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:57:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations to you Sunshine. Tom
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:56:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 6:57:00 PM
Such a lovely imagery in your poem, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:55:00 AM
- Sandra, many thanks for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 4:22:00 PM
I love the different metaphors you so creatively use to describe both sunrise and sunset, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:54:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 3:26:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Anne-Lise, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:54:00 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 12:53:00 PM
This is SO beautiful, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:57:00 PM
- Janice, many thanks for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Beautiful twin pieces that reflects the artistry of your golden pen! Just magnificent! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:32:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:30:00 PM
- Thank you for your congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2018 12:06:00 PM
Two great poems, very descriptive.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:30:00 PM
- Many thanks S.O., really proud of my first place in this contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2018 7:27:00 PM
Oh such breathtaking imagery Anne-Lise in both your sunrise and sunset. The beauty of nature is expressed with tender loving care in your stunning verses. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 2/17/2018 6:50:00 AM
- Each picture has its own color and beauty, Susan :) - .... Difficult to choose just one :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2018 12:45:00 PM
ohh, love the dichotomy between sunrise and sunset.. this is beautiful, anne.. happy huggs
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Date: 2/17/2018 6:46:00 AM
- Thanks Nette ... for the lovely comment, much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2018 12:29:00 AM
Beautiful imagery depicted in your lovely verses Anne-Lise. Good luck in the competition....Maria xxx
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Date: 2/16/2018 1:53:00 AM
- Many thanks Maria, glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2018 8:07:00 PM
So beautiful Anne-Lise, I liked them both but especially the one about sunsets…it does feel a little melancholy when you watch the sunset! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2018 1:49:00 AM
- Sometimes we wish the day had more hours ... time is running so fast - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2018 7:58:00 PM
Lovely, Jan!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2018 1:47:00 AM
- Do not blame it on Jan :)))
Date: 2/15/2018 7:50:00 PM
well done poet, liked both and wish you good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/16/2018 1:41:00 AM
- Thanks Frederic ... for the lovely comment, much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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