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Behavior perfect Deep cold snow how can she poop My small dog Kissy If my dog could talk I try to understand her She drown in the snow 18.01.2016 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 1/28/2016 3:51:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, this time i have to admit i was not drawn in by the fact this was a Haiku, i was drawn in by the name. Our golden retriever used to Love the snow, of course, that was until the snow hardened on her paws and then she could hardly walk. As always, i like the Haiku Anne-Lise. Poor little mite. A Lovely Haiku as always Anne-Lise. Hugs.....Vladislav. X. A seven and a fav.
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:32:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit a "fav." + a 7 and comments, Vladislav :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/25/2016 11:37:00 AM
Never thought about the dogs and snow. Perhaps if I had a dogie... I like cats. But that interesting how you've penned those dainty haiku. I've been editing much of what I thought was haiku; much more to go thanks to someone's comment to another... All of life is about learning one way or another.
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Date: 1/25/2016 11:44:00 AM
- Yes, it is true regarding learning Iris :) - I always admired Haiku poems ..... I learned it here on "soup" after long exercise ...... I have two dogs, one large and one small :) - Many thanks for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/22/2016 10:27:00 AM
Makes me miss our dog when I read this. Can honestly say that she used to make me exercise every day.lol love phyl
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:46:00 AM
- A excellent exercise and a faithful friend :) - Many thanks for your visit, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 4:49:00 PM
Poor Kissy! She'll have to wear a nappy:) Enjoyed your write, Anne Lise....I do not envy you the cold and ice!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:40:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Paul :) .... a nappy :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 12:10:00 PM
Well my dog lives on the mountain so he always goes into the heather smiling excellent pen Anne lise wishing you a blessed day dear friend
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:17:00 PM
- A free and happy mountain dog, Liam :) - Thanks and best wishes - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 11:12:00 AM
Oh the mind goes into overdrive, tiny poem, a lot to think about..lve this, Anne Lisa
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:18:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 8:15:00 AM
Anne Lise adorable!!! :D hehehe i enjoyed!hugs!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:14:00 PM
- Olive, thank you for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 7:39:00 AM
I love Haiku!! Good ones / Chrissie
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:13:00 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, Chrissie:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2016 8:25:00 AM
Anne-Lise, this so adorable. I hope you are enjoying the weather. Thanks for sharing-Alexis
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Date: 1/20/2016 3:11:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2016 8:18:00 AM
no matter how cold it is....dogs will handle their biz....whether on grass, sand or snow....when it's time to poop, the dog will let it go....lol....very cute anne....;)
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Date: 1/19/2016 2:36:00 PM
- The snow is so deep ...... butt gets icy ...... not comfortable :)))- Many thanks for your visit, Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2016 7:45:00 AM
Very cute, dear Anne-Lise! Hope you haven't lost her into the snow !
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Date: 1/19/2016 7:50:00 AM
- Kissy and me just returned home, from a long walk in the beautiful winter landscape - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2016 2:41:00 PM
Excellent pen Anne- Lise! Beautifully penned double Haikus and the pics are so cute!:))Sending you love n' prayers.Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D.
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Date: 1/19/2016 2:42:00 PM
- I could not posted mine own photo ...... neither of the two dogs are Kissy ..... the first a bit similar :) - But she is really cute :)
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Date: 1/19/2016 10:15:00 AM
Kissy is so adorable and beautiful Anne- Lise.I'm so glad that she's doing okay.Taking a nice walk outside is very healthy for everyone, even during the very cold and snowy winter months when it might be lots of snow covering the ground.Well, keep yourself very warm and take good care of Kissy too:)) Hugs! D.
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Date: 1/18/2016 2:50:00 PM
- It's so cold for small dog feet, Dorian :) - Many thanks for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2016 1:58:00 PM
Adorable! How can doggie pee in the cold? Warmest regards!
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Date: 1/18/2016 2:03:00 PM
- To pee ...... does not take such a long time ....... easily done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2016 1:37:00 PM
Anne-Lise I love this Haiku! Nothing is better than our puppies :) *smiles*-luloo
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Date: 1/18/2016 2:46:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, Luloo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2016 12:47:00 PM
ohh, my dachshund is beside me as i read this superb string of 'ku.. what a delight, anne.. happy day with huggs
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Date: 1/18/2016 12:57:00 PM
...... but no deep snow, Nette - Thanks, from Kissy :)

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