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- Haiku X 63 - the Same Earth -

Light rays from the sun Gilt edges around the frame Small rainbow children Even where weeds grow You leave traces in the sand It is our own earth The thin little strands And the world will be as one Everyone on board 27.08.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 10/20/2015 1:07:00 AM

PERFECT! To say any more is to spoil it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2015 3:49:00 AM

- Thanks for the visits and lovely comments, Edlynn - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/8/2015 12:25:00 PM

The Sun shows a great impartiality and way of nice unity. The wold is one, i too believe always. 7 again, i am helpless. Thanks for your support. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2015 12:47:00 PM

- I read your poems with pleasure - and it is always an honor and pleasure that you are supporting my poems :) - Thank you, my good friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/2/2015 5:10:00 AM

very beautifully painted anne lise excellent picture pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2015 5:16:00 AM

- My dream : Love on earth, dear Liam :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/30/2015 6:59:00 AM

Lovely sentiment. Great haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Tks

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2015 7:32:00 AM

- Glad you like it, Ravi :) - Thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2015 1:48:00 PM

may the gold of the sun find you, sweet anne.. hope you are well rested today.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2015 7:32:00 AM

- Thank you for comments and visits, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2015 6:10:00 PM

very nice, Anne. I love that line "small rainbow children!"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2015 7:07:00 AM

- They are our future :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2015 4:09:00 PM

Love it , Anne-Lise, Hugs eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2015 7:07:00 AM

- Eve, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2015 1:38:00 PM

really beautiful, dear anne...may your friday be fine.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 1:48:00 PM

- Dear Nette, I'm so glad you're here :) - It helps me to understand how beautiful the world is :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 8/28/2015 12:32:00 PM

Very well done haiku ,Anne! Yes it was indeed an effortless but magnificent write! :O)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 2:02:00 PM

- Dear Aiyah, it is about creating the future and make the world a better place to live in :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Josefina Costales

Date: 8/28/2015 10:02:00 AM

So this must be your 63rd haiku? A form I envy those who seem to write it so seamlessly without seeming effort. Love this

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 1:57:00 PM

- Yes, my haiku number 63 :) - We do not live forever ..... we have just this moment ..... - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Josefina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/28/2015 9:47:00 AM

It is well written with powerful imagery that liberate their presents from the page and enter our minds and hearts with ease of skill. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 1:53:00 PM

- God want even the smallest creature welcome to the world, and to be as himself ..... a part of something bigger :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/28/2015 7:31:00 AM

A display of beauty! Simply marvelous, dear Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 1:39:00 PM

- The love in us humans, it will merge with other great powers - The energy does not disappear - Love is the ribbon that binds the whole earth together :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/27/2015 11:58:00 PM

I simply loved this. Soup mail!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 1:29:00 PM

- You're absolutely right - That's what poetry does for us ..... we interpret and read it differently .... a haiku can be read individual, but it is deeper thoughts between the lines - Although it may look simple: ) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/27/2015 10:01:00 PM

You bring light and positivity to a world darkened by pain and apathy, Anne. Shine forth! hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 4:14:00 AM

- There should be room for everyone in "the boat" - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/27/2015 6:01:00 PM

If only my friend, if only..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 4:13:00 AM

- I wish for an earth where flowers will grow - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/27/2015 5:06:00 PM

Yes the world will be as one...lovely A-L

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 4:11:00 AM

- A sky without stars, it would be sad ..... it's all about sharing - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/27/2015 3:41:00 PM

i like this very much, anne lise - especially the last verse...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 4:09:00 AM

- Sharing a life and an earth - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Ilene - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 8/27/2015 2:58:00 PM

Beautiful sentiment.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 4:05:00 AM

- A pleasure to share with you, James - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/27/2015 2:38:00 PM

what a wonderful world as seen through your eyes, anne... i enjoy your lit heart.. happy day and huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2015 4:03:00 AM

- A wish for the world - thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)