- Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line -

Dew wet spider web 

        Sparkling pearls on fine parade 

        Life's boasting beauty 






  23.10.2014
  Anne-Lise Andresen :)
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:56:00 PM
I love spider webs and your imagery paints a beautiful picture
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2014 3:09:00 AM
- Tim, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2014 6:38:00 AM
Your haiku captures perfectly the ethereal beauty of a spider's silken web. Fantastic collaboration
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2014 6:42:00 AM
- Monterey, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2014 4:07:00 AM
Very nice collaboration here. frank herrera is the only one i collaborate with from here. love haiku form.format
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2014 4:12:00 AM
- Cindy, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2014 9:20:00 PM
Great colaboration excellent haiku.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2014 3:57:00 AM
- Maurice, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2014 6:39:00 PM
good haiku! much better than mine!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2014 4:10:00 AM
- Then I have to read yours Van :)) - thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2014 8:20:00 AM
Though I'm not in the least a fan of spiders I am a fan of their beautiful webs... such intricate designs and you have captured a dew kissed one divinely !!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 9:04:00 AM
- I'm not too fond of spiders me rather - Debra, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2014 7:47:00 PM
This is winner my friend so light and lovely, good luck in the contest I'll be crossing my fingers for you guys, cheri glad you like my route 666 and Anne Lise, booo! LOL RIGHT BACK AT YOU GIRL LOL
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 6:08:00 AM
- Cherl, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - This is not written for contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2014 3:59:00 PM
Very creative work for you two..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Reads like a winner to me ..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 6:07:00 AM
- Sara, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - This is not written for contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2014 2:50:00 PM
lovely imagery,anne and D... I am enjoying this.. huggs on a great Friday!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 3:01:00 PM
- Nette, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2014 2:15:00 PM
Very pretty and vivid picture of a spider web. Kudos to you both . Xx~Xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 3:01:00 PM
- Kim, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 4:43:00 PM
It's a joy seeing the dew on Spiders Webs. For one it highlights the intricate spinning of such an engineering feat. Loved this piece Anne Lise, James :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 2:05:00 AM
- James, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 2:17:00 PM
I didn't even realize this was a collab.... congrats to Demetrios as well! I wonder how one can do a collab on such a small poem... interesting.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/23/2014 2:37:00 PM
Ahhh cool. Collabs can sometimes be fun... it's interesting to see how two minds work together.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 2:31:00 PM
- :))) We have 2 lines each (with the title) ..... then it became to an beautiful Haiku! :))))
Date: 10/23/2014 2:02:00 PM
powerful piece you both painted very beautifully penned
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 2:16:00 PM
- Liam, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 1:05:00 PM
Quite exquisite, Anne! There is a celebration for life - even for the less popular of creatures. Beautiful haiku!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 1:28:00 PM
- The great things inspires awe in us, but the little things affect us - Timothy, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 12:58:00 PM
I love it! I read it as imagining soup on the world wide web. Great!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 1:32:00 PM
- Dan, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 8:14:00 AM
Beautiful write Anne Lise, never thought of it that way. The spider's web is so truly beautiful , especially with the dew while the sun shines its pearls :) eve
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 8:35:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Eve :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 7:49:00 AM
Wow! The imagery in this magnificent write is truly amazing my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning Anne-Lise! I'm so impressed with your talent you have displayed with this awesome piece! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 8:36:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Russell :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 7:33:00 AM
Oh that's right. But the poor spiders! excellent metaphor for dew love.-------rajat
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 8:36:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Rajat :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 7:21:00 AM
Dear Anne Lise, go to soup mail, please!
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Date: 10/23/2014 6:21:00 AM
that sure is! i like this!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 7:08:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on my : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend, Casarah :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 5:24:00 AM
Goodness just goodness...Very nice and universal truth...Best to you...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 7:08:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on my : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend, Sandip :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 4:06:00 AM
simply stunning haiku Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 4:58:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and comments my friend,Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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