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Tim Peterson

Date: 12/9/2014 8:56:00 PM

I love spider webs and your imagery paints a beautiful picture

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2014 3:09:00 AM

- Tim, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/9/2014 6:38:00 AM

Your haiku captures perfectly the ethereal beauty of a spider's silken web. Fantastic collaboration

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2014 6:42:00 AM

- Monterey, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton

Date: 10/29/2014 4:07:00 AM

Very nice collaboration here. frank herrera is the only one i collaborate with from here. love haiku form.format

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2014 4:12:00 AM

- Cindy, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/28/2014 9:20:00 PM

Great colaboration excellent haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2014 3:57:00 AM

- Maurice, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Van Yan

Date: 10/26/2014 6:39:00 PM

good haiku! much better than mine!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2014 4:10:00 AM

- Then I have to read yours Van :)) - thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/25/2014 8:20:00 AM

Though I'm not in the least a fan of spiders I am a fan of their beautiful webs... such intricate designs and you have captured a dew kissed one divinely !!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 9:04:00 AM

- I'm not too fond of spiders me rather - Debra, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/24/2014 7:47:00 PM

This is winner my friend so light and lovely, good luck in the contest I'll be crossing my fingers for you guys, cheri glad you like my route 666 and Anne Lise, booo! LOL RIGHT BACK AT YOU GIRL LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 6:08:00 AM

- Cherl, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - This is not written for contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2014 3:59:00 PM

Very creative work for you two..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Reads like a winner to me ..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 6:07:00 AM

- Sara, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - This is not written for contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/24/2014 2:50:00 PM

lovely imagery,anne and D... I am enjoying this.. huggs on a great Friday!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 3:01:00 PM

- Nette, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/24/2014 2:15:00 PM

Very pretty and vivid picture of a spider web. Kudos to you both . Xx~Xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 3:01:00 PM

- Kim, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser

Date: 10/23/2014 4:43:00 PM

It's a joy seeing the dew on Spiders Webs. For one it highlights the intricate spinning of such an engineering feat. Loved this piece Anne Lise, James :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 2:05:00 AM

- James, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/23/2014 2:17:00 PM

I didn't even realize this was a collab.... congrats to Demetrios as well! I wonder how one can do a collab on such a small poem... interesting.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/23/2014 2:37:00 PM

Ahhh cool. Collabs can sometimes be fun... it's interesting to see how two minds work together.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 2:31:00 PM

- :))) We have 2 lines each (with the title) ..... then it became to an beautiful Haiku! :))))

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/23/2014 2:02:00 PM

powerful piece you both painted very beautifully penned

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 2:16:00 PM

- Liam, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/23/2014 1:05:00 PM

Quite exquisite, Anne! There is a celebration for life - even for the less popular of creatures. Beautiful haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 1:28:00 PM

- The great things inspires awe in us, but the little things affect us - Timothy, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dan Helppi

Date: 10/23/2014 12:58:00 PM

I love it! I read it as imagining soup on the world wide web. Great!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 1:32:00 PM

- Dan, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/23/2014 8:14:00 AM

Beautiful write Anne Lise, never thought of it that way. The spider's web is so truly beautiful , especially with the dew while the sun shines its pearls :) eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 8:35:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Eve :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/23/2014 7:49:00 AM

Wow! The imagery in this magnificent write is truly amazing my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning Anne-Lise! I'm so impressed with your talent you have displayed with this awesome piece! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 8:36:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Russell :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/23/2014 7:33:00 AM

Oh that's right. But the poor spiders! excellent metaphor for dew love.-------rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 8:36:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Rajat :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/23/2014 7:21:00 AM

Dear Anne Lise, go to soup mail, please!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/23/2014 6:21:00 AM

that sure is! i like this!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 7:08:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on my : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend, Casarah :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami

Date: 10/23/2014 5:24:00 AM

Goodness just goodness...Very nice and universal truth...Best to you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 7:08:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on my : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend, Sandip :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2014 4:06:00 AM

simply stunning haiku Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 4:58:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments my friend,Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)