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- Haiku X 36 - School Out -




       I still remember 
       slide down a polished railings 
       Autumn holidays


       Sleeping until noon 
       Dance happily in the wind 
       No homework this week






       07.10.2014
       A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 1/20/2015 12:58:00 AM
Nostalgic... going down the memory lane...
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:42:00 AM
- Yes, some time back ..... - Nadiya, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 7:36:00 AM
That's right. Holidays are so wonderful. You can enjoy yourself like a bird. Two good haiku, Anne-Lise LOVE))))) rajat
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Date: 10/23/2014 7:45:00 AM
- Rajat, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2014 12:52:00 PM
Aye, those were the days Anne Lise. Takes me back, James :)
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Date: 10/18/2014 1:40:00 PM
- James, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/17/2014 1:43:00 AM
I've never slid down a polished railing before... but i have slid on a giant ice cube down green hills in summer time... fun times! The first haiku is my favorite. A lot of vibrancy and joy in it.
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Date: 10/17/2014 2:19:00 AM
- Timothy, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2014 3:33:00 PM
loved the no homework when I was a student. that was rare!! cute ones.
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Date: 10/15/2014 4:03:00 PM
- Me too :)) - Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2014 2:39:00 PM
A great Haiku, very effective :)
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Date: 10/15/2014 2:44:00 PM
- Richard, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2014 9:24:00 AM
I love this one. I always got in trouble for sliding down the railings at school
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Date: 10/15/2014 9:42:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Monterey - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2014 5:54:00 PM
Lovely memories in these two haiku, Anne Lise. I enjoyed holidays and playing, but I hated school and homework; I preferred going to my grandfather's farm instead! /x/ paul
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:24:00 AM
- The holidays were the best, Paul!!!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2014 2:45:00 PM
Happy time for me too. Love, daver
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Date: 10/9/2014 4:02:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Daver - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2014 2:41:00 PM
Remembering care free school days! I enjoyed your Haiku and intend to read more of your poems.
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Date: 10/9/2014 4:01:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Darlene - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2014 2:15:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Like it. Tfs
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Date: 10/9/2014 2:28:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Ravi my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/8/2014 6:23:00 PM
Yeah!! The children do say..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2014 2:27:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,dear Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/8/2014 5:12:00 PM
A beautiful set of kus, loved them. Going to add these to my favs.
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Date: 10/9/2014 2:33:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, comments and favs. on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Maurice - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/8/2014 4:04:00 PM
I just love your Haiku's
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Date: 10/9/2014 2:27:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Harry my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/8/2014 11:10:00 AM
This is a really nice Haiku. You should write more.:)
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Date: 10/8/2014 11:29:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Michael - (no email adr. - You can write on Soup- mail) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 11:17:00 PM
A lovely dual haiku. love phyl
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:07:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Phyllis my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 7:24:00 PM
anne lise beautifully drawn duo dear friend excellent pen
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:07:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Liam my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 6:39:00 PM
A fine couple of senru's Anne-Lise. Happy you have those kind of memories. Sadly I can do the same. I really liked these two poems, I prefer senryu over haiku.
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:09:00 AM
- The holidays were the best,Jerry !!!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 2:18:00 PM
A chance to enjoy the autumn's holy day without home work and rest until noon. Time of nice relaxation of the past. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/7/2014 2:56:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -,Bl my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 1:42:00 PM
Ah, those were the holiday days...
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:45:00 PM
- Happiness in life was school holiday :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, M.L. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 10:36:00 AM
Sleeping until noon...when jobless!
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:46:00 AM
- Children under 16 are not allowed to work in Norway - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Muhammad - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 10:11:00 AM
Those were the days, my friend, Anne Lise! Beautiful times masterfully expressed!
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:48:00 AM
- Yes, those were the days,my dear friend Demetrios - thanks for your nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 9:59:00 AM
what a joy to read of merry days when life was innocent and filled with naughty school time of autumn.. happy Monday, anne.. huggs
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:50:00 AM
- Lots of fun memories - thanks for your nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 8:23:00 AM
I wish I could sleep in...beautiful haiku....hugs Tim
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:52:00 AM
- Young people can sleep for 23 1/2 hours in a day :))) - Thanks for your nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2014 7:50:00 AM
I like no homework! Life was so easy in school, then we grow up, thanks for a beautiful haiku sweetie
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:54:00 AM
- Just do ..... nothing - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my haiku: - Haiku X 36 - School Out -, Casarah - oxox // Anne-Lise :)