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- Haiku X 369 - fawn -

                                         in her solitude
                                  independence at own risk ~
                                      with quiet resolution

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2025

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Sotto Poet Date: 7/26/2025 5:41:00 AM A strong and concise haiku—so great fragility and power condensed into a few lines. Anne-Lise. Warm hugs Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 7/22/2025 6:55:00 AM I'm in awe of the deer's coloring, do you think it's natural or enhanced? I could happily stare at that picture for an hour. The haiku is great, very clever and I enjoyed it. I'm off to see if you've posted any humor. I've been gone awhile and really missed my Anne-Lise' humor fixes. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/22/2025 1:36:00 AM Lovely picture. Reminds me of when my mother took me to watch my first film. Splendid haiku. Hugs. Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 7/21/2025 1:51:00 PM Anne-Lise, as you note, a lot is at play when we go out into the world. A lot of risk to think about, but we do it. Hopefully with the risk mitigated. Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 7/21/2025 4:56:00 AM Awww thats simply lovely Sunshine! Debx Login to Reply

Rowena Velasco Date: 7/19/2025 7:57:00 PM A powerful and succinct senryu—so much strength and vulnerability wrapped in these few lines. The phrase “independence at own risk” speaks volumes, and the “quiet resolution” lingers with a dignified echo. Beautifully done. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 7/18/2025 6:25:00 PM Great imagery and feelings. Soup mail Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 7/15/2025 7:41:00 AM Anne-Lise, your haiku is so beautiful in its depiction of the wonder of nature! Happy Tuesday xxoo Login to Reply

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/14/2025 4:58:00 PM lovely and captivating words...like the 'quiet resolution' at the end! Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/13/2025 5:24:00 AM lovely. God bless you, love, Gina Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 7/12/2025 11:33:00 AM Perfect Haiku. Very nice! . Hugs :) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/12/2025 11:20:00 AM lovely haiku, my friend Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/11/2025 11:19:00 AM Quiet resolution. Such a nice phrase Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/11/2025 6:52:00 AM Truly, two is better than one. Very nice ku! Login to Reply

Anne Winter Date: 7/11/2025 5:14:00 AM A beautiful picture and a beautiful haiku calming my heart with tranquility. I'm so glad I read it. I miss your friday poems. Love, Anne Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/10/2025 5:29:00 PM Nature's serenity and peace is evoked by this poem about a fawn's first independent steps. Loved it, and the picture, too! :) hugs Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 7/10/2025 4:37:00 PM A books worth of wisdom, in so few lines. Great writing! Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 7/10/2025 2:39:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise, your poem feels like a gentle nod to all those who choose authenticity, even when it’s lonely or uncertain. A wonderful tribute to inner strength, to the peace that can be found in our own company, and to the silent determination that carries us through. Amen! Summer Blessings, Dear Anne-Lise, Daniel Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 7/10/2025 11:10:00 AM Beautiful fawn and surrounding. Nice summer haiku. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/9/2025 2:48:00 PM Ahhh!!! Beautiful fawn. Yes, they rest in a quiet place while mom feeds in the surrounding area. Soon they will be on their own. Thanks for sharing. Love the photo that goes along. Sara K Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 7/9/2025 12:36:00 PM Cool summer haiku! Login to Reply