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09.07.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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in her solitude independence at own risk ~ with quiet resolution

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/22/2025 6:55:00 AM

I'm in awe of the deer's coloring, do you think it's natural or enhanced? I could happily stare at that picture for an hour. The haiku is great, very clever and I enjoyed it. I'm off to see if you've posted any humor. I've been gone awhile and really missed my Anne-Lise' humor fixes. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/22/2025 1:36:00 AM

Lovely picture. Reminds me of when my mother took me to watch my first film. Splendid haiku. Hugs.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/21/2025 1:51:00 PM

Anne-Lise, as you note, a lot is at play when we go out into the world. A lot of risk to think about, but we do it. Hopefully with the risk mitigated.

Deb M

Date: 7/21/2025 4:56:00 AM

Awww thats simply lovely Sunshine! Debx

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/19/2025 7:57:00 PM

A powerful and succinct senryu—so much strength and vulnerability wrapped in these few lines. The phrase “independence at own risk” speaks volumes, and the “quiet resolution” lingers with a dignified echo. Beautifully done.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/18/2025 6:25:00 PM

Great imagery and feelings. Soup mail

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/15/2025 7:41:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your haiku is so beautiful in its depiction of the wonder of nature! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Sara Baker

Date: 7/14/2025 4:58:00 PM

lovely and captivating words...like the 'quiet resolution' at the end!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/13/2025 5:24:00 AM

lovely. God bless you, love, Gina

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/12/2025 11:33:00 AM

Perfect Haiku. Very nice! . Hugs :)

Jack Horne

Date: 7/12/2025 11:20:00 AM

lovely haiku, my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2025 11:19:00 AM

Quiet resolution. Such a nice phrase

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2025 6:52:00 AM

Truly, two is better than one. Very nice ku!

Anne Winter

Date: 7/11/2025 5:14:00 AM

A beautiful picture and a beautiful haiku calming my heart with tranquility. I'm so glad I read it. I miss your friday poems. Love, Anne

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/10/2025 5:29:00 PM

Nature's serenity and peace is evoked by this poem about a fawn's first independent steps. Loved it, and the picture, too! :) hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/10/2025 4:37:00 PM

A books worth of wisdom, in so few lines. Great writing!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/10/2025 2:39:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, your poem feels like a gentle nod to all those who choose authenticity, even when it’s lonely or uncertain. A wonderful tribute to inner strength, to the peace that can be found in our own company, and to the silent determination that carries us through. Amen! Summer Blessings, Dear Anne-Lise, Daniel

Jay Narain

Date: 7/10/2025 11:10:00 AM

Beautiful fawn and surrounding. Nice summer haiku.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2025 2:48:00 PM

Ahhh!!! Beautiful fawn. Yes, they rest in a quiet place while mom feeds in the surrounding area. Soon they will be on their own. Thanks for sharing. Love the photo that goes along. Sara K

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 7/9/2025 12:36:00 PM

Cool summer haiku!