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- Haiku X 362 - clouds in grey -

                                        piercing cloud layers
                                  shamelessly without remorse ~
                                     june stubborn downpour

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2025

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Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 6/20/2025 10:19:00 AM you beautifully captured a rainy June in your Haiku. We had a rainy June as well. I could almost smell the rain, hugs yellow rose Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/11/2025 3:09:00 AM You write haikus so well. I have three on my list and still wondering if I should delete them. They are no good. Hugs. Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 6/10/2025 1:44:00 PM Beautiful Haiku, Anne-Lise. LOVE white blooms, to me they are pure and untainted, almost spiritual. How can I 'have', 'find' that pic? Looking at it was like going to church. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2025 2:07:00 PM Good one. I actually wish for them. My grass is turning yellow Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/6/2025 6:35:00 PM They’ve no good conscience! Login to Reply

Anne Winter Date: 6/6/2025 8:37:00 AM Dear Anne-Lise, yes so many scary and stormy downpours. I like light summer rain without the lightning. Nice haiku ! Best, Anne Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 6/6/2025 6:02:00 AM Dear Anne-lise, Oh June’s wild spirit so perfect and yes I can almost feel that stubborn downpour pushing through the clouds, unbothered by anything in its path. There’s a boldness and honesty in your words that I really admire. Poetry never fails to move me, rain or shine. Spring Blessings, My Dear Anne-Lise, Danie Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 6/6/2025 5:24:00 AM We too are having stubborn downpour to the point of submerging land and even houses. Great haiku, dear Anne. Hugs! Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/6/2025 12:07:00 AM Nice Haiku, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/6/2025 12:58:00 AM - Thanks, Subimal :) - hugs

Vladislav Raven Date: 6/5/2025 12:54:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent Haiku, painting for me a wonderful picture. I do love the rain, but not when it is being driven by the wind. It is strange but your words bring me peace. I love both the picture and the Haiku. They complement each other so well. Your friend always ..... Mike. XXX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/6/2025 1:01:00 AM - Too much rain in Norway... we should have had flippers like ducks ... - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Mike :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/5/2025 11:51:00 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku write. Great/Pretty Picture... We need rain. Send some this way. Hahaha!!!! Have a blessed day writing away............. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/5/2025 12:15:00 PM - With pleasure, Paula ... you want the cold wind too ? - Thanks :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 6/5/2025 11:23:00 AM Beautiful picture and haiku. It is summer time. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/5/2025 11:37:00 AM - It doesn't feel like it, Jay ... 11 degrees, windy and rainy :( - Thanks :) - hugs