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05.06.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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piercing cloud layers shamelessly without remorse ~ june stubborn downpour

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2025 6:35:00 PM

They’ve no good conscience!

Anne Winter

Date: 6/6/2025 8:37:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, yes so many scary and stormy downpours. I like light summer rain without the lightning. Nice haiku ! Best, Anne

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/6/2025 6:02:00 AM

Dear Anne-lise, Oh June’s wild spirit so perfect and yes I can almost feel that stubborn downpour pushing through the clouds, unbothered by anything in its path. There’s a boldness and honesty in your words that I really admire. Poetry never fails to move me, rain or shine. Spring Blessings, My Dear Anne-Lise, Danie

Valsa George

Date: 6/6/2025 5:24:00 AM

We too are having stubborn downpour to the point of submerging land and even houses. Great haiku, dear Anne. Hugs!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/6/2025 12:07:00 AM

Nice Haiku, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/6/2025 12:58:00 AM

- Thanks, Subimal :) - hugs

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/5/2025 12:54:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent Haiku, painting for me a wonderful picture. I do love the rain, but not when it is being driven by the wind. It is strange but your words bring me peace. I love both the picture and the Haiku. They complement each other so well. Your friend always ..... Mike. XXX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/6/2025 1:01:00 AM

- Too much rain in Norway... we should have had flippers like ducks ... - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Mike :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/5/2025 11:51:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku write. Great/Pretty Picture... We need rain. Send some this way. Hahaha!!!! Have a blessed day writing away.............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2025 12:15:00 PM

- With pleasure, Paula ... you want the cold wind too ? - Thanks :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 6/5/2025 11:23:00 AM

Beautiful picture and haiku. It is summer time.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2025 11:37:00 AM

- It doesn't feel like it, Jay ... 11 degrees, windy and rainy :( - Thanks :) - hugs

- Haiku X 362 - clouds in grey -

05.06.2025

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