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Rene Chabriere

Date: 12/21/2014 5:01:00 AM

It may be very big apples...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/21/2014 5:04:00 AM

- :)) .... A VERY POWERFUL BULL !!!!- Rene, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/22/2014 11:40:00 AM

That's virile bull, definitely the act of Zeus....Planning for world's greatest eviction. Love Anne...rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 11:42:00 AM

- Rajat, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 8:51:00 AM

Enjoyable haiku, Anne Lise! Now why could this not have happened ages ago, then Eve would not have had to pick one from the tree...just from the ground! Enjoy your Sunday:) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2014 8:54:00 AM

- The bull was not created :))) - Paul, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/29/2014 1:08:00 PM

I get Adam and Eve and the Garden of Eden. Great haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2014 3:46:00 PM

- Maurice, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2014 12:18:00 PM

I love that earth shakes free phrase. A very interesting haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 12:31:00 PM

- Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/28/2014 7:12:00 AM

Excellent. Very creative Anne. I like it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 7:14:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/27/2014 11:57:00 AM

Nice unique haiku Anne Lise. Have a nice weekend. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:53:00 AM

- Phyllis, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/27/2014 5:47:00 AM

Oh this is clever Anne Lise, didn't expect that last line,,,truly powerful that is....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:52:00 AM

- Harry, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/26/2014 2:52:00 PM

Nice, concise and much in a small package. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:52:00 AM

- M.L, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/26/2014 7:27:00 AM

Creative...stunning images. I love your haikus.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:51:00 AM

- Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2014 12:12:00 PM

have a great time, anne..or back home?.. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2014 12:23:00 PM

(Back home on Sunday !!!)

Harley White

Date: 9/25/2014 9:48:00 AM

Very evocative...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2014 12:08:00 PM

- Harley, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 9/25/2014 5:25:00 AM

nice haiku .:) :) haikus amaze me how precise yet so much information, a feel of lessons in life, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2014 12:08:00 PM

- Cynthia, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/24/2014 9:13:00 AM

Brilliantly done, images are incredible.... by the way i am poor at Haiku :( ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2014 12:24:00 PM

- Malik, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/23/2014 11:28:00 AM

still savoring Turkish nights?.. happy Tuesday, anne... huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2014 12:23:00 PM

- Yes :)))

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/22/2014 3:53:00 AM

Excellent. Well said. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2014 11:16:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/21/2014 4:05:00 PM

Anne Lise could it be you mean a different apple. In Germany the apples dropping from the animals have a completely different meaning.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2014 2:48:00 AM

- The apples from the trees,Brenda ..... not from the ass to animals :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/21/2014 2:14:00 PM

really beautifully painted vision dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2014 2:49:00 AM

- Liam, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2014 12:13:00 PM

my, this describes the theme with interesting imagery.. 'earth shakes free drop down'...very delectable... here's to a bright Monday, anne.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 1:02:00 PM

- Nette, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/19/2014 2:01:00 PM

Wonderful seasonal haiku enjoyed from you. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/27/2014 9:21:00 AM

Natural compulsion can't be denied. Read my poem " Might's easy justice", please. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2014 3:37:00 PM

- Bl, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Mwangi

Date: 9/19/2014 5:45:00 AM

a beautifull Haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2014 12:18:00 PM

- James, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn

Date: 9/19/2014 5:19:00 AM

Apples a new crop Falling from bottom and top Never seemed to stop PS. Along with the love I have for your poems. And a Haiku to you too. Is that what they say when someone sneezes? I thought that Haiku was 5-7-5. Jim Horn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2014 9:16:00 AM

- I'm not so good at counting as you - But, thanks nevertheless James :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/19/2014 5:00:00 AM

So true, so imaginative and... appetizing! Excellent! Good luck, Anne Lise, have a nice weekend picking free drop apples!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2014 12:17:00 PM

- Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku: - Apples Drops - oxox // Anne-Lise :)