- Haiku X 345 - change of weather -


                                         triumphant gesture
                                  the cloud supply is dissolved -
                                             frost liberation

januarynaturewinterhaiku

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/21/2025 1:35:00 PM

Anne-Lise, you've created a sense of relief for a bit of sunshine and thawing. We know there's a bit of back and forth during this time of year as the weather changes, but you make it something special. Smiles!!!

Valsa George

Date: 1/20/2025 8:49:00 PM

With temperature rising, the snow lying frozen gets thawed. Great haiku, matching well with the image. Love and hugs.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/15/2025 6:24:00 AM

This is a delicious poem, Anne-Lise. Your description of the scene is spot on. When the snow melts, I can almost feel it.

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/15/2025 5:08:00 AM

The imagery in your words perfectly match the picture. I can imagine the thaw setting in. Lovely haiku Anne-Lise

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/14/2025 3:21:00 PM

Nice photo nice poem! I love countryside. :-) hugs ~ AA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2025 1:14:00 PM

- I live in the countryside, Abdullah :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2025 1:54:00 PM

The thaw can't come quick enough, I hope it continues for you. Tom

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/14/2025 9:45:00 AM

Lovely, Anne; a ways to go in the High Country. A couple more months.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/14/2025 7:41:00 AM

I love the last line the most " frost liberation" how clever , beautiful and well woven haiku, you always amaze me with the way you paint imagery in haiku, and love the picture youv used too dear anne lise! Sending you light always