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30.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                      low constant rumble
                                 ignorant breath of the night -
                                       lightning formations

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/6/2024 11:58:00 AM

An interesting concept that the thunder isn't intelligent. I never thought about it that way, but it does seem funny when the storm or storms are distance and there is a constant low sound that just doesn't end.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 1/31/2024 3:12:00 PM

Loved this haiku. A moment caught by your heart. Nice picture to go with. Hugsxxx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/31/2024 10:15:00 AM

I really enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku write/great picture. Few words with much said. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/31/2024 7:14:00 AM

Superb imagery my friend. The "ignorant breath of the night" is brilliant! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/31/2024 7:12:00 AM

Your imagery and feelings so well said. I love the word," ignorant" giving it a touch lacking awareness . Many blessings and hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/30/2024 3:37:00 PM

I was particularly impressed by the depth of your Haiku, especially the eloquent portrayal of 'ignorant breath of the night'. Your choice of words was truly masterful, Anne.