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13.12.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Winter Haiku - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

2 st place in the contest

on blue-frozen snow small mouse papery rustling ~ path sparkles with stars

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2023 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:40:00 AM

Back with. Congrats. Hope you are having an Awesome Christmas

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/24/2023 12:38:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/24/2023 7:38:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write again. What a cute picture. Love It. Hugs... Merry Christmas...........

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/14/2023 5:43:00 PM

I can actually hear the sound in my head as you describe it. That's pretty powerful poetry. Really impressive!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2023 1:35:00 PM

that last line is adorable!

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 7:38:00 AM

Awwwthis is a lovely one! Good luck in the contest

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2023 6:57:00 PM

What a fun Haiku write/cute picture. I enjoyed this one. Good Luck.. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..........

Deb M

Date: 12/13/2023 3:20:00 PM

Sweet poem sweet picture Sunshine! Lovely…Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/13/2023 3:02:00 PM

Excellently penned haiku, my friend. Beautiful, but chilly, imagery, Anne.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2023 2:44:00 PM

Ahhh!!! The painting makes it look like a lovely pet. Not so though. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2023 1:40:00 PM

Brrr, we all seek she from the cold even the poor mouse. Good luck in the contest Anne Lise. Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/13/2023 12:11:00 PM

Wonderfully crafted Haiku, Anne-Lise, your imagery brings to my mind an exquisite picture of a frozen winter land, perfectly. Best wishes for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/13/2023 12:41:00 PM

- Cold for both humans and animals... I don't like winter, Las -Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 12/13/2023 10:31:00 AM

Nice haiku from your frozen winter land,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/13/2023 12:37:00 PM

- Deep frozen for a few weeks now ... cold for little mice ... many thanks, Jay :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/13/2023 9:28:00 AM

Lovely imagery! Verse woven like lace, the precious cuff of ever endearing poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/13/2023 9:52:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joe ... we have frozen blue snow ... and many small wood mice where I live ... but, they have no clothes :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/13/2023 9:10:00 AM

Oh, love this so. God bless you sweet lady. much love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/13/2023 9:49:00 AM

- Many thanks, Gina ... it's cold for a sweet little winter mouse :) - hugs