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- Haiku X 294 - cold mouse -

                                              on blue-frozen snow
                                        small mouse papery rustling ~
                                            path sparkles with stars

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2023

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Sara Kendrick Date: 12/26/2023 5:23:00 AM Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/25/2023 11:40:00 AM Back with. Congrats. Hope you are having an Awesome Christmas Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 12/24/2023 12:38:00 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/24/2023 7:38:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write again. What a cute picture. Love It. Hugs... Merry Christmas........... Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 12/14/2023 5:43:00 PM I can actually hear the sound in my head as you describe it. That's pretty powerful poetry. Really impressive! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/14/2023 1:35:00 PM that last line is adorable! Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/14/2023 7:38:00 AM Awwwthis is a lovely one! Good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/13/2023 6:57:00 PM What a fun Haiku write/cute picture. I enjoyed this one. Good Luck.. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.......... Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 12/13/2023 3:20:00 PM Sweet poem sweet picture Sunshine! Lovely…Debx Login to Reply

Jerry Brotherton Date: 12/13/2023 3:02:00 PM Excellently penned haiku, my friend. Beautiful, but chilly, imagery, Anne. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/13/2023 2:44:00 PM Ahhh!!! The painting makes it look like a lovely pet. Not so though. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/13/2023 1:40:00 PM Brrr, we all seek she from the cold even the poor mouse. Good luck in the contest Anne Lise. Tom Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 12/13/2023 12:11:00 PM Wonderfully crafted Haiku, Anne-Lise, your imagery brings to my mind an exquisite picture of a frozen winter land, perfectly. Best wishes for the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/13/2023 12:41:00 PM - Cold for both humans and animals... I don't like winter, Las -Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 12/13/2023 10:31:00 AM Nice haiku from your frozen winter land, Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/13/2023 12:37:00 PM - Deep frozen for a few weeks now ... cold for little mice ... many thanks, Jay :) - hugs

Joe Dimino Date: 12/13/2023 9:28:00 AM Lovely imagery! Verse woven like lace, the precious cuff of ever endearing poetry. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/13/2023 9:52:00 AM - Thank you very much, Joe ... we have frozen blue snow ... and many small wood mice where I live ... but, they have no clothes :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh Date: 12/13/2023 9:10:00 AM Oh, love this so. God bless you sweet lady. much love, Gina Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/13/2023 9:49:00 AM - Many thanks, Gina ... it's cold for a sweet little winter mouse :) - hugs