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30.08.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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of dizzy autumn in dark honey reflection - were kissed by plum lips

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/9/2023 6:55:00 PM

The beauty of the autumn season can be both dazzling and dizzying at the same time ... You capture such wonders and share them with us all in this lovely poem :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2023 1:01:00 PM

Wow!! How interesting is this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by. Sara

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/1/2023 7:22:00 AM

Wow Anne Lise, I love the metaphor as well as the imagery and also the simplicity of you're haiku.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2023 6:38:00 PM

A beautiful image of a fall leaf!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 12:29:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/31/2023 2:22:00 PM

A dizzy autumn that will make us spin like a dervish lol, your enrich my life when I read you Anne :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 12:30:00 AM

- Many thanks ... a pleasure to share with you, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 8/31/2023 10:58:00 AM

Nice haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2023 11:02:00 AM

- Thank you, Jay :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 8/31/2023 7:39:00 AM

I enjoyed this haiku Anne, Very nicely penned

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2023 8:57:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs

Sally Eslinger

Date: 8/31/2023 6:23:00 AM

Luscious vision! Must make this a Fav, Anne-Lise, because it has truly, TRULY given me a new & lasting way of not only seeing but Feeling autumn as i will see& feel it soon. Here, your 17 syllables in 3 lines present a sort of life-size diorama…Fantastic fantasy!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2023 7:03:00 AM

- Autumn has arrived ... the colors provide inspiration, Sally :) - Thank you so much for comment and fave :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/31/2023 4:02:00 AM

Wow. I love this! Amazing writing. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2023 7:02:00 AM

- Many thanks, Gina ... a pleasure to share with you :) - hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/30/2023 7:03:00 PM

Oh my gosh, this is just stunning!! I just chewed on my lips, maybe they’ll turn plummier. Lol. I love love it. My fave too :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2023 7:01:00 AM

- Plump lips can be bought... but they look like beaks... plum lips are sweet and juicy, Akkina :) - Thank you so much for comment and fave :) - hugs