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Haiku "aha" Moment The way you touch me you haunt me to no avail... Sail to heaven's gate 06.08.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Sponsor:Regina Riddle Contest Name:Haiku "aha" Moment Deadline:9/1/2014 - Thanks for my 3rd place in contest -

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Date: 5/20/2015 4:25:00 PM
Anne, slowly reading through your selection of wonderful haiku.... Just love the ideas that can be expressed in three short lines~Delice
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Date: 5/21/2015 4:12:00 AM
- Many of my small verse .... are being rewritten to a Haiku :) - A great way to say what you mean :) - Thank you for your visit, Delice - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/4/2014 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations for the 3rd Place, dear!
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Date: 9/4/2014 8:42:00 AM
- Thank you for comments and enjoyable visit, Archana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/13/2014 11:32:00 AM
This is an ahhhh haiku Anne Lise. No other words needed. love phyl
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Date: 8/13/2014 12:21:00 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit,dear Phyllis ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/13/2014 8:26:00 AM
Sweetness, sensuality, and romance rolled into a few short lines. Love it!
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Date: 8/13/2014 8:43:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Monterey my friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/11/2014 3:51:00 AM
i enjoy haiku. this one is a gem. thank you.
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Date: 8/11/2014 6:18:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2014 5:55:00 PM
Very cool, I enjoyed this, grats on your win !
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:14:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Casarah :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2014 9:45:00 AM
A splendid haiku you creatively penned my dear friend Anne Lise. I like it so much! Big congrats on your great win & thank u s much for sharing! Big Hugs and cheers! By the way, I'm so glad that you've seen my gift to u. Finally, i was able to post it. Only that I changed the title. I'm so sorry again for the delay. Thank u so much as well my very dear friend Anne! You're also one of God's gifts to me. God bless u and your loved ones always! Many hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/10/2014 11:59:00 AM
- You did the best you could ..... posted several times without success - P-S's fault !!! - The new title is super :) - Thanks for visiting and congrats, my dear friend Leonora :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2014 9:25:00 PM
If I didn't say it earlier. A Big belated Birthday wish to you.
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Date: 8/10/2014 4:40:00 AM
- Thank you, Andrea <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2014 11:43:00 AM
Great emotive haiku Anne...congrats :)
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:45:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2014 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed reading this beautiful romantic haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:38:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2014 6:17:00 AM
Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Your visit to my page with congrats was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2014 6:18:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Sara :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2014 5:13:00 AM
Love your aha moment. Best wishes
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Date: 8/9/2014 5:19:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Linda (3rd place in contest) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2014 4:29:00 AM
congrats Anne, Great feelings. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 8/9/2014 5:10:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Sam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 9:04:00 PM
This one is best haiku anne-lise!!!
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Date: 8/9/2014 5:10:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Marvin ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 7:20:00 PM
Weeee.. That's so endearing..:) nice one
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Date: 8/9/2014 5:09:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Olive ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 4:08:00 PM
To live your words, and send me on my way. For I'll meet you at Heaven's Gate. Terrific Anne Lise, simply terrific. Have a lovely weekend - James :)
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Date: 8/9/2014 5:07:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, James ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 2:59:00 PM
Dear Anne, You have written so beautiful poem. It portraits full meaning of love and ecstasy. Your message is here that true love only opens the door of happiness to anyone for their comfortable and joyful life. Thanks and regards. Kamal
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Date: 8/8/2014 3:05:00 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Kamal ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 1:28:00 PM
big applause on your win, dear anne... hugs to you!
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:33:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, sweet Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 12:39:00 PM
Wow lovely haiku Anne Lise ! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:54:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Dr. Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 1:54:00 AM
Wow! Moments of love and haunt. Really a great combination. Very well-written! Cheers, Divya
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:49:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku,Divya - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 1:12:00 AM
Very deep write. congrats on the win, Anne
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:53:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Dr. Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 12:28:00 AM
Beautiful Anne..thank you..so heartfelt
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:49:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Craig - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2014 12:04:00 AM
awesome to see this one again. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:53:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2014 9:45:00 PM
Steamy! I like it. ~Jeremy
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:50:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Jeremy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2014 2:52:00 PM
Aha! So this is what haunting love amounts to! Must be quite an unnerving experience. I can see two sides of love here....one desirable....the other repulsive. Take your pick (but then, my mind runs ahead of me...). /x/ paul
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:51:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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