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his mind is engaged cold dive into the fresh snow - in search of a mice 07.12.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 12/8/2022 11:02:00 AM
His expression is one of unwavering resolve. Quite a wonderful likeness, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 11:07:00 AM
- He knows what he wants ... :)
Date: 12/8/2022 5:57:00 AM
Do mice survive the snow?
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 6:02:00 AM
- Yes, they do ... we often see mice in the snow ... last winter we had to catch them ... there were so many -
Date: 12/8/2022 3:11:00 AM
Amazing how they can find critters beneath the snow. Lovely, Anne-Lise. I read your comments to me...Thank you, my dear friend. Stay safe and warm as the snow falls this morn. Hugs Charlie
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 6:04:00 AM
- Winter is no problem for mice ... they survive ... but I don't have a cat :) -
Date: 12/7/2022 8:55:00 PM
Love the picture and the haiku, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 12/8/2022 6:04:00 AM
- Thanks, Jo :) -
Date: 12/7/2022 4:19:00 PM
Will he find any under the snow? Such a lovely picture you paint Sunshine.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 6:06:00 AM
- No problem, Wendy ... as long as the snow is "soft" -
Date: 12/7/2022 1:39:00 PM
So cute! I can picture it!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2022 6:06:00 AM
- Thanks, Kim :) -
Date: 12/7/2022 1:13:00 PM
I guess he wanted a frozen treat. LOL..Enjoyed reading this one today. I got a chuckle. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2022 1:25:00 PM
- can be thawed in the microwave in one minute, Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 12/7/2022 1:05:00 PM
You've got a top winner, here, Anne-Lise! Good luck in the contest and God Jul to you and your family - Bob H
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2022 1:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment and wishes, Bob :) - (this is not for contest) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs
Date: 12/7/2022 10:55:00 AM
He looks determined! Splendid portrait, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 12/7/2022 11:03:00 AM
- He is focused on his prey - Thanks, Vijay :) -
Date: 12/7/2022 10:34:00 AM
Good one Anne, he'll soon find his way back in to curl up by the fire. Tom
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Date: 12/7/2022 10:48:00 AM
- Definitely ... - Thanks, Tom :) -
Date: 12/7/2022 10:26:00 AM
So, that's what a snow cat looks like? ha ha! Love these lines, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2022 10:31:00 AM
- ... yes ,this is a "snow cat" literally :) - Thanks, Jenna :) -

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