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Haiku with borrowed feathers the ancient tree of wisdom - sky is the limit In Norwegian med lånte fjær det eldgamle visdoms tre - grensen - himmelen 12/01/2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/16/2022 12:54:00 PM
A beautiful write and moss picture. Moss covering the ground/tree is so pretty. I like the way to added it "In Norwegian." Very creative. Have a blessed day/week writing away, hugs................
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Date: 1/16/2022 1:05:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2022 11:30:00 PM
ahhhh so pretty; last line is my favorite also.
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Date: 1/13/2022 6:55:00 PM
I don't exactly get it, but this is indeed one of the best poems I've ever had the joyous opportunity to read. Thank you
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Date: 1/13/2022 6:45:00 AM
Love that last line!
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 5:09:00 PM
This is a beautiful haiku, Anne-Lise. Picture perfect! Hugs // Charlie
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Date: 1/13/2022 4:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 9:15:00 AM
Great imagery , Sunshine. Blessing to you thorough out your new year my friend.
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Date: 1/13/2022 4:40:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 7:59:00 AM
Simply lovely.... I wonder from where you have picked up such an apt image ! Love and hugs, Anne
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Date: 1/12/2022 8:02:00 AM
- Thank you very much Valsa, I download almost all the pictures from pinterest.com :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 7:49:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, You penned such a lovely verse. I echo what Connie said. Well done. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a good day- Alexis
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Date: 1/12/2022 8:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - Have a nice day you too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 6:40:00 AM
Your carefully chosen words combined with this stunning photo make an enchanting haiga Anne-Lise. Of course your haiku stands alone too in its beauty. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:31:00 AM
- Thanks, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 6:34:00 AM
With your words, Anne-Lise, you have created a magnificent scene. Great picture too// Hugs
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:30:00 AM
- Thanks, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 5:10:00 AM
I see it aiming for sky. Superbly done...both photo and poem.
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:29:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 4:56:00 AM
I like this one. Very descriptive and expressive work. I am glad you shared in your native language. Sara
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Date: 1/12/2022 5:04:00 AM
- Free choice ... English or Norwegian, Sara :))) - Thank you very much for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 4:22:00 AM
Great picture and poem. Hugs xx
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Date: 1/12/2022 5:02:00 AM
- Thanks, Victor - I assume you read it in Norwegian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 3:32:00 AM
Love this sweet friend. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/12/2022 3:33:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 3:04:00 AM
You paint a beautiful scene with your words Anne. Tom
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Date: 1/12/2022 3:25:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)