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HAIKU with clear pearls of dew trembling steam beam from the sun - silver-plated bed *** In Norwegian med klare duggperler skjelvende dampstråle fra solen - en sølvbelagt seng 11/01/2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/14/2022 11:30:00 PM
I do not know which I like better - the poem or the photo. Is it yours too?
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Date: 1/13/2022 9:20:00 AM
I like this one. I enjoy seeing those dew drops or raindrops. If you look closely, those drops are like little mirrors reflecting the area around them. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:49:00 AM
- I am very fascinated by dew / water drops ... so beautiful, Sara :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2022 6:46:00 AM
Pretty!
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:47:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2022 3:52:00 AM
I see the glistening pearls, not silver plated, but golden plated in the amber beams of the sun ! A beauty to behold, Anne !
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:47:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 7:56:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, Your haiku is lovely. The photo and poem complement each other well. Nice touch writing it in Norwegian as well. Great job- Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:46:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2022 12:51:00 AM
A masterpiece of beauty, my dearest, Anne-Lise! Blessings!
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:46:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 4:32:00 PM
Oh! I'm aware of the pearls. Anne-Lise, you've written a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:45:00 AM
- Thank you very much for reading, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 3:39:00 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise. Love the pic. I too wish I could hear you recite it in Norwegian. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:45:00 AM
- It sounds more beautiful in English, Judy :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 11:02:00 AM
this is very beautiful, anne-lise! wish i could hear it in norwegian...
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:44:00 AM
- I want to read it to you, another day :) - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 10:04:00 AM
Oh! I see the pearls. Beautiful poem, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:42:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 9:05:00 AM
I read it in Norwegian and understood nothing :) Just joking. Your English version is stupendous. So is your picture. Great poetry. Hugs xx
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:42:00 AM
- Of course you read it in Norwegian :))) - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful, Anne-Lise! Have a good day.
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Date: 1/13/2022 10:41:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful image Anne, hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:53:00 AM
- We have had a beautiful weather today, Tom ... 6 + degrees and sunshine ... it sparkled in silver pearls everywhere :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/11/2022 7:34:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Peter
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:38:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)