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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/20/2021 5:54:00 AM

Delightful, Sunshine ~ p.s. he's a little young to babysit, lol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 1:56:00 PM

- Yes, it is too young :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/8/2021 11:44:00 AM

Both your write and picture are so very cute. Where is his blanket and mommy??? Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2021 12:35:00 PM

- Mom will be back soon ... put the wings around their newborn baby :) - Thank you very much for visiting my poem, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/8/2021 9:49:00 AM

Oh the thoughts of spring but will be a little while yet. Nice haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2021 10:10:00 AM

- A little early here too ... but I have snowdrops in my garden :) Thank you very much for visiting and your comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2021 3:31:00 AM

How sweet this is, Anne-Lise! Hopefully the little bird will soon have two more fledglings to play with :) Hugs & best wishes for tomorrow "International Women's Day" // paul

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/6/2021 10:33:00 PM

Aw, he's hungry and alone; what a precious piece.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2021 2:18:00 AM

- Thanks for visit and your comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2021 11:41:00 AM

How precious baby birds look, Sunshine. I wonder if those are robin's eggs. The last line evokes a bit of fear for the hatchling's safety. Birds used to nest in my hanging impatiens and my cats tried to jump up and topple the nest. A compelling haiku, dear. Hugs, carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2021 12:19:00 PM

He is born knowing how to get fed. Great photo. Good work. Thanks for the visit. I am glad to know someone else has two chihuahuas. One was put out at my house 6 years ago. He has been something else. I don't know it it was from the stress of being out on his own(no one could get their hands on him) or if he was mistreated by the former owners or what his problem is. I think maybe part personality(aggressive). Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2021 7:02:00 AM

Anne-Lise, Hairy, wants to be with me but doesn't want me to touch him unless he wants me to touch him which he will let me know by scratching me with his nails. He then will let me pet him maybe one or two strokes then he will start growling. Strange dog. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2021 12:31:00 PM

- It's always difficult to take over a dog we do not know the background of, Sara ... who knows why he behaves the way he does ... I'm glad he got a lovely home :) - Thank you very much for visiting my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/2/2021 11:55:00 AM

Just marvelous! Congratulations dearest, Anne-Lise! So touching! Hugs xxx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/2/2021 11:22:00 AM

Love this lady... God bless you. Love, Gina

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/2/2021 10:29:00 AM

Or it is the morning of the Resurrection and it is the first one out? What an hoot! Aloha! Rico

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/2/2021 7:22:00 AM

Hi Anne- Lise, This a good haiku. Moma bird went to go find food for them to eat. Adorable photo as well. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/2/2021 5:42:00 AM

This reminds me of a recent picture of my cousin’s newborn laying amidst several dolls. She was scared I think wondering why none other than her was awake. A setup by her wacky dad. Cute pic!

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/2/2021 3:35:00 AM

(Oh, no you're not alone...; never...) Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Thanks for your constant uplifting comments. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2021 12:36:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comments, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/2/2021 2:58:00 AM

Mom is searching for breakfast. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2021 12:36:00 PM

- I'm sure, Tom :) - Back soon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/1/2021 10:58:00 PM

Great haiku, open to ideas. No mate? Sterile? Eggs eaten by crows? Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2021 12:35:00 PM

- There will be more siblings ... and mom and dad are in the store to buy food ... it's going well ... it was just a little lonely and scared, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Belden Raiser

Date: 3/1/2021 3:43:00 PM

What a beauty.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2021 12:32:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting my poem, Belden :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/1/2021 3:40:00 PM

Very nice... but I trust mother nature ...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/9/2021 6:33:00 PM

Always...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2021 12:17:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comments, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)