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a frosted flower language of winter silence ~ magical and white velvet rim frozen hard struggle of existence ~ in the glass coffin 13/01/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/21/2021 12:15:00 PM
Creative haiku.
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:17:00 AM
- Thank you very much Juliet, for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2021 12:56:00 PM
“Glass coffin” is perfect! Wow!
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:16:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2021 1:51:00 PM
Wow, I like this one very much, Anne Lise! Especially the reference to a "glass coffin." I never thought of frost that way. Excellent and another fave! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2021 11:22:00 AM
Anne-Lise, absolutely beautiful, wow _Constance
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:16:00 AM
- Constance, thank you very much for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2021 7:32:00 AM
Anne-Lise, this is awesome. "Glass coffin"--great metaphor! Janice
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Date: 1/29/2021 5:15:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 5:54:00 PM
So beautiful! Keep coming! a fave!
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Date: 1/16/2021 1:34:00 AM
- JCB, thank you very much for your lovely comment and the fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 5:35:00 PM
My word this is GORGEOUS!!! True, you are a VERY gifted poetess :)
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Date: 1/16/2021 1:33:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 8:39:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise, exquisite words, great imagination... Hugs Belle:-)
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Date: 1/15/2021 8:44:00 AM
- Belle, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2021 7:18:00 AM
Wow! A great Haiku, Sunshine, your imagery is just stunning. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/15/2021 8:43:00 AM
- Eve, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 12:12:00 PM
Reality mixed in with fantasy, such is life, such is a great haiku, and not too bad a poet either, couldn’t resist that, brilliant cheers David
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Date: 1/15/2021 8:43:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 11:53:00 AM
Oooh that pic lends it to your final line...in the glass coffin!
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Date: 1/15/2021 8:43:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 9:12:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku! Very nice :)
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Date: 1/14/2021 10:07:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 5:32:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise and the picture brings it to life. Great job. God Bless, JB I like to walk my dogs at midnight too. Wouldn't go alone at that hour.
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Date: 1/14/2021 7:12:00 AM
- We go together, Judy :) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2021 4:56:00 AM
Haiku of outstanding beauty my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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Date: 1/14/2021 7:11:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2021 2:50:00 PM
Brr I can feel winters chill, but even winter has its beauty. Hope you're well Anne. Tom
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Date: 1/14/2021 4:18:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2021 2:22:00 PM
Great vocabulary Anne-Lise~~language of winter silence~~ and~~ struggle of existence. Your photo speaks through your words.
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Date: 1/14/2021 4:17:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2021 1:12:00 PM
Your fantasy is great. Loved the picture and the haikus. ~~
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Date: 1/14/2021 4:17:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2021 11:33:00 AM
Very nice! Lovely nature..
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Date: 1/13/2021 11:46:00 AM
- Abdullah, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2021 11:29:00 AM
Frosted and frozen, such is the beauty of nature. Your photo is as lovely as your lines, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/13/2021 11:45:00 AM
- Beautiful but cold, thank you very much Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2021 11:23:00 AM
amazing imagery and the picture is fantastic, well penned Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/13/2021 11:44:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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