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- Haiku X 194 - Snow White -

a frosted flower
                                  language of winter silence ~
                                           magical and white

                                            velvet rim frozen
                                  hard struggle of existence ~
                                             in the glass coffin







                                               13/01/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Juliet Ligon Date: 1/21/2021 12:15:00 PM Creative haiku. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2021 5:17:00 AM - Thank you very much Juliet, for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/17/2021 12:56:00 PM “Glass coffin” is perfect! Wow! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2021 5:16:00 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/16/2021 1:51:00 PM Wow, I like this one very much, Anne Lise! Especially the reference to a "glass coffin." I never thought of frost that way. Excellent and another fave! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 1/16/2021 11:22:00 AM Anne-Lise, absolutely beautiful, wow _Constance Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2021 5:16:00 AM - Constance, thank you very much for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/16/2021 7:32:00 AM Anne-Lise, this is awesome. "Glass coffin"--great metaphor! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2021 5:15:00 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JCB Brul Date: 1/15/2021 5:54:00 PM So beautiful! Keep coming! a fave! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2021 1:34:00 AM - JCB, thank you very much for your lovely comment and the fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing Date: 1/15/2021 5:35:00 PM My word this is GORGEOUS!!! True, you are a VERY gifted poetess :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2021 1:33:00 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds Date: 1/15/2021 8:39:00 AM A beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise, exquisite words, great imagination... Hugs Belle:-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2021 8:44:00 AM - Belle, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/15/2021 7:18:00 AM Wow! A great Haiku, Sunshine, your imagery is just stunning. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2021 8:43:00 AM - Eve, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh Date: 1/14/2021 12:12:00 PM Reality mixed in with fantasy, such is life, such is a great haiku, and not too bad a poet either, couldn’t resist that, brilliant cheers David Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2021 8:43:00 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/14/2021 11:53:00 AM Oooh that pic lends it to your final line...in the glass coffin! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2021 8:43:00 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 1/14/2021 9:12:00 AM Beautiful Haiku! Very nice :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 10:07:00 AM - Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball Date: 1/14/2021 5:32:00 AM A beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise and the picture brings it to life. Great job. God Bless, JB I like to walk my dogs at midnight too. Wouldn't go alone at that hour. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 7:12:00 AM - We go together, Judy :) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/14/2021 4:56:00 AM Haiku of outstanding beauty my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 7:11:00 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/13/2021 2:50:00 PM Brr I can feel winters chill, but even winter has its beauty. Hope you're well Anne. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 4:18:00 AM - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/13/2021 2:22:00 PM Great vocabulary Anne-Lise~~language of winter silence~~ and~~ struggle of existence. Your photo speaks through your words. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 4:17:00 AM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/13/2021 1:12:00 PM Your fantasy is great. Loved the picture and the haikus. ~~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 4:17:00 AM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 1/13/2021 11:33:00 AM Very nice! Lovely nature.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2021 11:46:00 AM - Abdullah, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan Date: 1/13/2021 11:29:00 AM Frosted and frozen, such is the beauty of nature. Your photo is as lovely as your lines, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2021 11:45:00 AM - Beautiful but cold, thank you very much Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 1/13/2021 11:23:00 AM amazing imagery and the picture is fantastic, well penned Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2021 11:44:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)