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04.02.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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A Valentine's Senryu
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

7th place in the contest

a fateful timing truth doubts - uncertain future ~ I leave you tongue-tied

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/14/2025 1:59:00 PM

Love and separation and unsure of the future can take a person on an emotional journey. Happy Valentines my friend. love phyl

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2025 8:50:00 AM

Anne-Lise, There's a lot here in a short poem. The end of love and separation could fill many novels. Take care and thanks for making me smile!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2025 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Goodbye Valentine" write and picture you have here. Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:09:00 PM

Aww this is so emotive. Good one, AnneLise

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/9/2025 12:57:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative senryu.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2025 5:01:00 PM

I can feel the pain of the uncertain future. Thanks for sharing this on with us. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/5/2025 10:50:00 AM

I feel the angst…

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/5/2025 10:07:00 AM

ewwww - heavy, Senryu delivered hit. Good job! CayCay

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/4/2025 11:47:00 PM

future is always, uncertain, i guess, and can change in a while, good luck in contest

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/4/2025 10:59:00 PM

Sadly it wasn't to be Anne-Lise, good luck in the contest. Greetings from Spain. Tom

Jay Narain

Date: 2/4/2025 10:24:00 AM

You should not be brokenhearted. There is a joyful event lurking around the corner. Nice Valentine Senryu.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/4/2025 1:15:00 PM

- Only a different Valentine poem, Jay :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2025 8:58:00 AM

A heart breaking one.. Especially when the truth is spoken.. Best of luck in the contest..

Lin Lane

Date: 2/4/2025 7:23:00 AM

You've made good use of the sidewalk crack to promote your broken-hearted Valentine Senryu. Well done, Anne-Lise!

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 2/4/2025 4:47:00 AM

Very nice Senryu to a good picture. Well done and a good entry for the contest.