- Give You My Thoughts -

Cheek to cheek, skin to skin
                                          A pleasure under the skin
                                               Tingling and warm
                                          Freeing thoughts and minds
                                          Reason and comprehensive
                                           Relationship and meaning
                                             Wholeness and artwork
                                               Endless possibilities
                                          Only those who can change
                                                    can continue




06.04.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
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Date: 5/19/2013 8:52:00 AM
really great write Anne,nice enjoy to read. well done. Hows Norway this day, Scotland dull & dreary. Have blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:36:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Gordon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/25/2013 8:04:00 PM
This is so very true... we must be able to change... That is my problem...I am always changing so it is hard for me to continue in my present. Thank you for your meaningful words...
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Date: 4/26/2013 1:13:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Valerie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/23/2013 8:01:00 PM
Really insightful work. You are very wise and I appreciate reading your inspirational work. Have a lovely week. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/24/2013 2:32:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2013 4:01:00 PM
Hi, a beautifully written piece, multi-layered and sensual. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/13/2013 4:01:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Seosamh. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2013 12:18:00 PM
Thank you because believe it or not I found my soul mate and he's a priest. I thought he was my Spiritual Director so I'm writing him letters. All through our journey, I found out his defect and I can heal it. I'm just sad that our lives on earth seem to be long before we get to the next you know... Do you have the copy of poetic forms because I need it. Thank you for this poem because I thought some of mine are too simple or light.
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:34:00 PM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Jacqueline, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2013 2:16:00 PM
Very nice work... Especially the last two lines. I find it hard to break routine but it's really the only way you can grow and mature...
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Date: 4/12/2013 2:09:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Timothy, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/10/2013 10:45:00 AM
Enthralling!
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:48:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Demetrios, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/9/2013 8:18:00 AM
very nice poem ( Only those who can change can continue) true expression I hope you the best go on regards Naji
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Date: 4/9/2013 8:22:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Naji, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/9/2013 7:56:00 AM
Your poem illustrates the creative change which occur when one strives for meaning in relationships. Good writing, Anne-Lise, and thank you for commenting on my poems. Greetings, David
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Date: 4/9/2013 8:15:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you David, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/9/2013 6:12:00 AM
This is a very lovely verse my dear friend Anne Lise giving me an awesome feeling while reading it. I truly enjoyed this brilliant and creative write of yours this evening. Thank you so much for sharing and your nice comments on my latest write. Great Wall is indeed a beautiful place to visit. Again, thank you so much and have a blessed and grace-filled day! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 4/9/2013 7:06:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Leonora, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/9/2013 3:32:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, this is a beautiful work of art that is filled with different imagery,and is open to different forms of interpretation. I like the line "Pleasure under the skin" ...it could be interpreted as paint brush on canvas creating a work of art or the literal pleasure originating from human nature... It can even be interpreted beyond that meaning
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Date: 4/9/2013 3:35:00 AM
Yes, you're right Christine :) - - Enjoyable with a visit from you, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 6:12:00 PM
Hello, Anne Lise. This is nice. The last part is very profound.
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:07:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Andrea, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 1:46:00 PM
Very sage art Anne - adaptability is paramount in successful survival - 'Hand to Back...' J.A.B. %
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Date: 4/9/2013 2:07:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Justin, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 7:50:00 AM
Evolve or stay behind. And I condone skin to skin. Just sayin'. Great job! :)
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Date: 4/8/2013 10:09:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Drake, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 7:10:00 AM
your poems are very stirring. thanks for a good read and your comments on mine. randy
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Date: 4/8/2013 7:16:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Randy, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2013 2:56:00 AM
i'm sooo in love with it...deep write..thank you Anne and have a nice week :-)
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:12:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Word, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 11:44:00 AM
Anne, so deep.......love it happy weekend. Terry xoxo a 7 >>>> well deserved.
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:52:00 PM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Terry, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 11:18:00 AM
Anne; I love your poem. You have given us beautiful thoughts. Thanks and God bless you....... Lucilla
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Lucilla, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 11:09:00 AM
Excellently done this extra ordinary poem where revolutionary thought is concerned.Thanks..................,loved always, bl
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you bl, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 11:01:00 AM
Anne, so deep.......love it happy weekend. Terry xoxo a 7 >>>> well deserved.
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:24:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Terry, thanks for your comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 8:41:00 AM
ahh so lovely... you have such a beautiful poetic Soul :) enjoyed so much your talented writes..as always <3 luv and hugs far off....wishing you a great weekend dear sista Anne Lise <3 Sk
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Date: 4/7/2013 8:43:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, Sukmawati! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 7:19:00 AM
Anne-Lise profound and beautiful...David
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Date: 4/7/2013 7:22:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 7:02:00 AM
heilloooo Anne Lise.. this is a great thought. i enjoyed the read and ur comments always uplifting :) have a wondeful weekend. oh where is Arild? i checked on his page.. no new poem :)
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Date: 4/7/2013 7:05:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, Dinda! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 5:38:00 AM
Interesting work that you have penned and placed here for us to read..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2013 5:39:00 AM
Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, Sara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2013 2:21:00 AM
Beautifully-made poem! Well crafted!! I got a piece of your thoughts. Thankx for your kind, encouraging comments on my poetry! xDD The beginning to the end were amazing. Have a good week! ~~~~~~~~~~DWB
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Date: 4/7/2013 5:08:00 AM
Thanks for the nice visit and for your comments, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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