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- Gentle Wings -

Grief can swallow you
                               Soft tears of love from your heart
                                          Memories to keep
                                 Pearl drops falling from the sky
                                         Eternity has no end














17.07.2017
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Ronald A. Williams Date: 8/4/2017 9:31:00 PM Sweet indeed. Keep the lovely I say also. Heart revealing. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/5/2017 4:53:00 PM - Ronald, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/23/2017 7:14:00 PM This is very lovely. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/24/2017 8:35:00 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi Date: 7/22/2017 3:25:00 AM One of my quotes is this: Grief is the waste product of love......Pashang Login to Reply Pashang Salehi Date: 7/24/2017 1:34:00 AM and to you as well my dear, you're very talented.... Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2017 7:04:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and your comments, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 7/21/2017 9:25:00 PM We treasure the memories...nicely penned Anne Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2017 7:04:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and your comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 7/19/2017 5:33:00 PM Your sunshine smile has no end Anne-Lise...a tonka of a tanka lol...^WW^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2017 3:01:00 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 7/19/2017 4:41:00 PM Beautiful Anne-Lisa, very wise poetry Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2017 2:59:00 PM - Thanks so much, Harry :) - Nice to see you - I appreciate your visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 7/19/2017 4:24:00 PM So very heartfelt words touching my soul, Sunshine, you are so blessed with peace of beautiful words to console ~* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2017 2:58:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments on my poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/19/2017 2:46:00 PM anne, don't let tears get the better of you... splendid work; happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2017 3:10:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments on my poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 7/19/2017 9:14:00 AM this is profound and so touching.. You said so much in such little words.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2017 3:09:00 PM - Thanks so much :) - I appreciate your visits and comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/18/2017 11:26:00 AM A beautifully penned Tanka; great imagery; I can see it clearly. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 2:04:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/18/2017 7:50:00 AM Heavenly Tanka dearest, Anne-Lise! Incomparably poetic! Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 2:04:00 PM - Thanks so much :) - I appreciate your visits and comments, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/18/2017 5:15:00 AM A soft whisper of love is your poem, Anne-lise:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 2:03:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments on my poem, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 7/18/2017 2:52:00 AM Beautiful read Anne-Lise, that and the mage I really enjoyed....Maria xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 1:57:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley Date: 7/17/2017 10:30:00 PM Hi Sunshine, I enjoyed reading it again and again. Heavenly :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 1:44:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments on my poem, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing Date: 7/17/2017 9:47:00 PM Profoundly beautiful, and I'm so sorry for your loss. Sending you warm hug, Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 1:57:00 PM - Glad you liked it, Akkina :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker Date: 7/17/2017 4:07:00 PM very deep poem Sunshine Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 1:29:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/17/2017 4:02:00 PM Very lovely, Sunshine!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2017 1:28:00 PM - Thanks so much, Andrea :) - I appreciate your visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/17/2017 3:37:00 PM I will add this uplifting gem to my faves Anne Lise it is a tough week as I have two funerals to attend:-(hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2017 3:41:00 PM - My friend will be buried next week - Thank you for a "fav" ... greatly appreciate it, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise

Charlie Smith Date: 7/17/2017 2:42:00 PM Lovely and soft Anne-Lise... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2017 3:14:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 7/17/2017 2:42:00 PM This is so nice, calming , beautiful :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2017 3:13:00 PM - Thanks so much, Heidi :) - I appreciate your visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 7/17/2017 2:39:00 PM So enchanting my friend, this felt like a whisper. Nicely done Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2017 3:05:00 PM - Glad you liked it, Chris - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 7/17/2017 2:24:00 PM Wonderful musing A-L. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2017 3:03:00 PM - Many thanks for the comments on my poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)