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18.12.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Echo thronging in the mountains living elements that haunt close Capture the inner turmoil in the humid fog Tie together with Antarctic hair grass You have three minutes A chorus of cries from the stubble plains You catch your share when the hunters moon burns The sand in the hourglass is about to run out The platform edge is closer than you realize and yet you cannot act Express your remorse nobody can rewind the minutes A choice that is valuable to win with head raised

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Date: 12/22/2024 6:28:00 PM
The first stanza is breathtaking - loved this poem <3
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Date: 12/20/2024 7:59:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I do love the message here. There's no time like the present indeed for expressing good behavior (including apologizing). It makes the world much more pleasant. Have a great Christmas!!
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Date: 12/19/2024 10:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a cute picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hugs... Merry/Blessed Christmas.................
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Date: 12/19/2024 10:09:00 AM
Oen of your best poems.
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Date: 12/19/2024 8:54:00 AM
Forgive and forget. It is the way up. Merry Christmas. Hugs.
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Date: 12/18/2024 4:01:00 PM
we have to be proud, for regretting too, whatever others think, marvellous poem, thanks anne lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2024 6:58:00 AM
- True, Yann - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 12/18/2024 3:50:00 PM
Now this is poetry! And a noticable nod to the last contest. I had to read it a few times and still trying to figure it out. I'm jus a simple man
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2024 7:02:00 AM
- Not that complicated... just say: "Forgive Me"... we are all simple people :) - Thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs

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